Teardrop
A human thing that can confuse38 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
How many times I have cried tears of joy. Tears are not always from pain and sadness, they come from all sorts of emotions. This is an excellent contest entry showing that perfectly. Well done, and good luck in the contest, :)) Sandra xxx
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How many times I have cried tears of joy. Tears are not always from pain and sadness, they come from all sorts of emotions. This is an excellent contest entry showing that perfectly. Well done, and good luck in the contest, :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
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Sandra, thank you for your kind review and comments.
Comment from Minglement
Beautifully expressed entry for the senryu contest. Tears can surely fall for many reasons. Happy tears are the best! Beautiful illustration as well. No suggestions for improvement. Good luck in the contest.
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Beautifully expressed entry for the senryu contest. Tears can surely fall for many reasons. Happy tears are the best! Beautiful illustration as well. No suggestions for improvement. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
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Minglement, thanks for your validation
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Teardrop" is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Teardrop" is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2020
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Duchess thank you!
Dear Anon,
you're very welcome!
God bless and take care,
the Duchess
Comment from WildWithWords
Gorgeous photo and lovely sentiments expressed in present tense. The final line "....from simply knowing" sums up so much about life and the experiences it gives us that, despite its outward simplicity, it is deeply profound in meaning.
Bill (WildWithWords)
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Gorgeous photo and lovely sentiments expressed in present tense. The final line "....from simply knowing" sums up so much about life and the experiences it gives us that, despite its outward simplicity, it is deeply profound in meaning.
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 11-Jan-2020
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Bill, thank you!
Comment from Sugarray77
How sweet this is and the photography you chose really helps the reader to realize the preciousness of your verse. A lovely flowing entry for the Senryu prompt.
Melissa
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How sweet this is and the photography you chose really helps the reader to realize the preciousness of your verse. A lovely flowing entry for the Senryu prompt.
Melissa
Comment Written 11-Jan-2020
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Melissa, thank you!
Comment from RShipp
Tears are a confusing thing... are they of Joy... or Sadness... or Anger... or Confusion... I suspect the list could go one.
I enjoyed your poem. You picked a great picture to go with the poem.
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Tears are a confusing thing... are they of Joy... or Sadness... or Anger... or Confusion... I suspect the list could go one.
I enjoyed your poem. You picked a great picture to go with the poem.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2020
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Yes, that is the human condition, tears are aplenty for many emotions.
Comment from Gail Denham
"From simply knowing" - what a good last line. There are times like that when joy brings a tear. Recently our sons gave me a birthday party - the house was full with family - when I think of it - it's joy.
Good poem.
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"From simply knowing" - what a good last line. There are times like that when joy brings a tear. Recently our sons gave me a birthday party - the house was full with family - when I think of it - it's joy.
Good poem.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2020
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Gail, what a fond memory and great Joy for you!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a lovely entry for the Senryu writing prompt.
This short verse tells of tears of joy, not pain.
The picture is adorable.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a lovely entry for the Senryu writing prompt.
This short verse tells of tears of joy, not pain.
The picture is adorable.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 11-Jan-2020
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Sharon, you validation is warming.
Comment from Dancemom
This is a great entry for the senryu contest. Your syllable count is correct. I like your sentiment of how tears from be produced from joy. Great job and thank you for sharing.
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This is a great entry for the senryu contest. Your syllable count is correct. I like your sentiment of how tears from be produced from joy. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2020
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I am humbled by your kind words.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, this is a lovely senryu dealing with a lovely emotion - tears of joy. Perfectly written, true to form. A lovely picture and an overall lovely display. I wish you good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Hello anon, this is a lovely senryu dealing with a lovely emotion - tears of joy. Perfectly written, true to form. A lovely picture and an overall lovely display. I wish you good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 11-Jan-2020
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Dorothy, I appreciate your kind validations.
