A Colorful Palette
A Quatrain entry9 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Quatrain poetry writing prompt.
This well rhymed verse tells of the changes of the seasons as seen in the foliage of trees.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Quatrain poetry writing prompt.
This well rhymed verse tells of the changes of the seasons as seen in the foliage of trees.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I saw the colourful seasons here in your words and I enjoyed the flow of your poem and the sentiment here, a finely metered and richly woven poem, you won my vote with this beautiful creation, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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I saw the colourful seasons here in your words and I enjoyed the flow of your poem and the sentiment here, a finely metered and richly woven poem, you won my vote with this beautiful creation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your encouraging and positive feedback!
Comment from RodG
The Speaker in this poem reminds us of the variety in four seasons, especially if you love trees. You employ ABAB rhyme very well and personify winter as a he who will "chill the air with blasts of cold." Nature here is nicely showcased. Rod
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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The Speaker in this poem reminds us of the variety in four seasons, especially if you love trees. You employ ABAB rhyme very well and personify winter as a he who will "chill the air with blasts of cold." Nature here is nicely showcased. Rod
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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I'm glad you enjoyed this piece on the changing of the seasons! Anxious for winter to move on and make way for spring...thanks for dropping by to read and review.
Comment from Pantygynt
If you go down in the jungle you will find that it is green all the year round, hot and damp too. thank heavens for our changing seasons, neatly reported in this rhyming and metrical piece.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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If you go down in the jungle you will find that it is green all the year round, hot and damp too. thank heavens for our changing seasons, neatly reported in this rhyming and metrical piece.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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I'm glad you enjoyed this piece on the changing of the seasons! Anxious for winter to move on and make way for spring...thanks for dropping by to read and review.
Comment from Ricky1024
"A Colorful Palette"
A Quatrain Contest Entry.
Rich ib Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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"A Colorful Palette"
A Quatrain Contest Entry.
Rich ib Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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I'm glad you enjoyed this piece on the changing of the seasons! Anxious for winter to move on and make way for spring...thanks for dropping by to read and review.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
A lovely take on the four seasons. I especially like your last summary stanza. How boring to spend t he w hole year i n s hades of green! I'm t hankful for four seasons, e ven when they're watered dow n. Forgive th e spaces. My mistake for typing late at nig h t.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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A lovely take on the four seasons. I especially like your last summary stanza. How boring to spend t he w hole year i n s hades of green! I'm t hankful for four seasons, e ven when they're watered dow n. Forgive th e spaces. My mistake for typing late at nig h t.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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I?m glad you enjoyed this piece on the beauty of nature?s harmony.
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you're welcome.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Amazing poem , I like how you waltz through each season keeping up the majestic disguise offered by our Creator. I really liked the playfulness of these stanza: "Variety enhances life
and nature shows us how it's done.
When marching just to drum and fife,
restrictions take out all the fun.
If all four seasons were the same,
the foliage would just stay green.
New England would then lose its fame,
except for Boston's best baked bean."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Amazing poem , I like how you waltz through each season keeping up the majestic disguise offered by our Creator. I really liked the playfulness of these stanza: "Variety enhances life
and nature shows us how it's done.
When marching just to drum and fife,
restrictions take out all the fun.
If all four seasons were the same,
the foliage would just stay green.
New England would then lose its fame,
except for Boston's best baked bean."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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I?m glad you enjoyed this piece on the beauty of nature?s harmony. Thank you for the generous rating!
Comment from Dancemom
This is a great entry for the quatrain poetry contest. Your words describe very detailed imagery of the changing seasons. I enjoyed your rhyming pattern. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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This is a great entry for the quatrain poetry contest. Your words describe very detailed imagery of the changing seasons. I enjoyed your rhyming pattern. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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I?m glad you enjoyed this piece on the beauty of nature?s harmony.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A lovely 'seasonal' offering for the contest. Although, you do need to hop back in there and make your third stanza a quatrain because, with five lines, it certainly is not... ;) :) Your palette is lovely! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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A lovely 'seasonal' offering for the contest. Although, you do need to hop back in there and make your third stanza a quatrain because, with five lines, it certainly is not... ;) :) Your palette is lovely! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the heads up. I fixed that line. That?s what happens when I get lazy and copy and paste on my phone! Appreciate the positive feedback.
