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A Usual Day

Days don't very much since I retired.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha, you made me smile here! I love, the get lucky bit! I loved your routine and I warmed to your life, I wish you luck with the contest and hope it is your lucky night tonight, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
    Thanks so much for the read and the encouraging comments. Glad you got a smile.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This one-hundred word story, A Usual Day, includes Fanstory for what might be a huge slot of time. Perhaps it can be expanded though by not showering, bowling, or sleeping?

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
    Thanks for your read and review. Got to do those things. But, still have a good piece of time for FanStory.
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
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I loved this little story and how you managed to convey a normal day in your life in 100 words. LOL at the part about Maybe Get Lucky! That was hilarious I must say. And at the end your to and fro visits to washroom were a sad and true thing! It happens I guess as you get older

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
    Thanks for your read and review. Happy you got a laugh.