My Mother s Eyes
At 94 years old, my mother is the wisest person I know.28 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 about a mother's love that never fades and we can always turn to them for advice when we do not know how to handle a situation.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 about a mother's love that never fades and we can always turn to them for advice when we do not know how to handle a situation.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for this salute to your mother--94 is fantastic! You completely captured your mother's wisdom in this 5-7-5 and accented it with the lovely artwork. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you for this salute to your mother--94 is fantastic! You completely captured your mother's wisdom in this 5-7-5 and accented it with the lovely artwork. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from lyenochka
Nicely done 5-7-5. What a blessing your mother is and how precious to her that you still look to her for wise advice. I like that you end with her wisdom that you can see in her eyes. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Nicely done 5-7-5. What a blessing your mother is and how precious to her that you still look to her for wise advice. I like that you end with her wisdom that you can see in her eyes. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Drew Delaney
You are certainly most fortunate to still have her around. I like the pic you chose, too.
And the colours go nicely with your 5/7/5 poem. I wish you luck in the contest.
Drew
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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You are certainly most fortunate to still have her around. I like the pic you chose, too.
And the colours go nicely with your 5/7/5 poem. I wish you luck in the contest.
Drew
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you. She is all I have really ever had. When my dad died, my mother had 7 little girls between the ages of 4 and 13. She was always wonderful.
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Comment from Cindy Warren
Your mother sounds wonderful. It's good to know she still has everything going for her at 94. I'd bet that her advice is always right. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Your mother sounds wonderful. It's good to know she still has everything going for her at 94. I'd bet that her advice is always right. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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She is wonderful! Thank you.
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Your mom must really be a mind and gentle human being. May she live a longer and healthier life as well. You managed to convey so much in a few words and that was amazing! Well done!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Your mom must really be a mind and gentle human being. May she live a longer and healthier life as well. You managed to convey so much in a few words and that was amazing! Well done!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent poem for the contest
but line two has only five syllables by my count (need seven)
and it must be a 5-7-5.
You already have a beautiful poem with excellent description,
just add two syllables like "loving"
Great picture choice
Good luck in the contest
Best wishes to you and your mom
Robert
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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You've written an excellent poem for the contest
but line two has only five syllables by my count (need seven)
and it must be a 5-7-5.
You already have a beautiful poem with excellent description,
just add two syllables like "loving"
Great picture choice
Good luck in the contest
Best wishes to you and your mom
Robert
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much! I was playing with words for that line and I guess I never finished! Thanks for saving me.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
This short verse tells of looking into mother's wise eyes, very nicely.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
This short verse tells of looking into mother's wise eyes, very nicely.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you !
