Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy

Excellent

Very good use of words and syllables. You were able use them into convey the though you desired in a masterfully way. Great job.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020

Thanks for the encouraging review. Cheers

Comment from Cybertron1986

Excellent

I love that analogy. It's unique in its imagery. One can already taste the danger in its potency LOL Great and creative piece. Thank you for sharing this!

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020

Thanks for the review. I thought the artwork was perfect to depict a grenade. Cheers

Comment from D.P. Anthony

Excellent

I liked the imagery! Your work needed no artwork to accompany it! I do not think I have ever read a poem about a Molotov before lol. Well done and best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020

Thanks for the encouraging review. It was a fun write, cheers.

Comment from Melody Koch

Good

I loved your poem it definitely captures the "fire" theme.I could see it throughout the whole thing. I love You're a poem very much and This is one of the best "fire" poems that I have seen.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020

Thanks for the review, cheers