Remembering Yesterday
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "The Beginning"A widow's journey into her relationship with her
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Good flow, drew me right into the story. The characters are well drawn and I can relate to the protagonist's lack of dating experience back in the day. I hope this ends well--look forward to more. Cheers. LIZ
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Good flow, drew me right into the story. The characters are well drawn and I can relate to the protagonist's lack of dating experience back in the day. I hope this ends well--look forward to more. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for your review and rating. Since it is a biographical true story, I can tell you I'm still around. I writing it so my children will know what my life has been like. I hoping people who have met me will enjoy it as well.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This seems to be a fascinating autobiographical book field with happy memories of a time long gone when life used to be simpler and innocent thank you for sharing
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This seems to be a fascinating autobiographical book field with happy memories of a time long gone when life used to be simpler and innocent thank you for sharing
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing it. It was a very different world back then. I'm enjoying remembering it.
Comment from Sasha
This is a beautifully written addition to your book 'Remembering'. I love the vivid description of the characters and emotions felt during this time. You eloquently bring them to life and I found myself fully engaged from beginning to end. I look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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This is a beautifully written addition to your book 'Remembering'. I love the vivid description of the characters and emotions felt during this time. You eloquently bring them to life and I found myself fully engaged from beginning to end. I look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much, Sasha. I had fun writing it because it is sort like reliving being young. I really appreciate the review.
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You are welome
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Isn't it amazing how naive we were back then? This sounds like a typical teenage girl to me, a far cry from todays teens. I am so happy to see you have returned. Well done, Beth. Nancy:)
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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Isn't it amazing how naive we were back then? This sounds like a typical teenage girl to me, a far cry from todays teens. I am so happy to see you have returned. Well done, Beth. Nancy:)
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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Thank you again, Nancy. Yes, I was totally naive. This chapter was long so I appreciate you reading it.
Comment from Ricky1024
"The Beginning" a chapter A chapter in your book "Remembering"
Was well-written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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"The Beginning" a chapter A chapter in your book "Remembering"
Was well-written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review. I appreciate you taking the time to read this.
Beth
