Blended Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Branching Points"A collection of stories: Some True, some not
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Comment from Bill Pinder
Powerful story that you have shared here. I encourage you for the courage it takes to write about abuse, especially when it involves abuse within your own family. I'm glad that you progressed by receiving therapy and doing better. I also loved hearing the story about your teacher Encouraging you. Bill
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Powerful story that you have shared here. I encourage you for the courage it takes to write about abuse, especially when it involves abuse within your own family. I'm glad that you progressed by receiving therapy and doing better. I also loved hearing the story about your teacher Encouraging you. Bill
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Bill, I have found Peace through Grace and I learned life through observation not expectations. In other words go with the flow. Doing things this way there are far fewer let downs in life. Mrs. B was among a handful of mentors that saved my bacon! Thank you for the supportive validations.
Comment from Stephanie Paige
You have had to endure so much in your young life. I am glad you are able to share it. I know that this was probably not easy for you. Thank you for sharing your story.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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You have had to endure so much in your young life. I am glad you are able to share it. I know that this was probably not easy for you. Thank you for sharing your story.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Stephanie, I have found Peace through Grace! I learned life through observation not expectations. In other words go with the flow. Doing things this way there are far fewer let downs in life. Mrs. B was among a handful of mentors that saved my bacon! Thank you for the supportive validations.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow. A strong person that you are to continue through and make a life for yourself outside of the hand that life dealt you... Best of luck in the contest... ;)
child of about 4 years old. --> child of about four years. OR four year old child.
and she is leaving, I thought. --> and she is leaving, I think.
turned grossly ugly. --> turned gross. OR turned ugly.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Wow. A strong person that you are to continue through and make a life for yourself outside of the hand that life dealt you... Best of luck in the contest... ;)
child of about 4 years old. --> child of about four years. OR four year old child.
and she is leaving, I thought. --> and she is leaving, I think.
turned grossly ugly. --> turned gross. OR turned ugly.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Yvette, thank you I see where I messed up the tense. I precipitate your observations
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow writer, thank you for sharing your deeply personal and sad story. I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Hello fellow writer, thank you for sharing your deeply personal and sad story. I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Dear friend, thank you, Life experiences can thicken our skins and some of us are lucky to soar above tough situations by Gods Grace and Gods guidance.
