Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

I love the powerful message conveyed in this. It is something that needs to be practiced by all mankind aggressively. I enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done my friend!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thank you Jeffrey, for your wonderful review and comments, much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I admired your reflections about the value of neighbors and your joining nonet format. Your concluding line is quite powerful and the artwork is reinforcing. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thank you for your great review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Susan Larson

Excellent

A beautiful pairing of nonets, I to we, then concluding we to one. I love the way you so subtly transition from past tense to future tense, becoming more and more positive as your words flow along.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thank you for your very inspiring review and comments, much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Kerry Foley

Excellent

Hello there, my friend. I love how you did this in joining Nonets and with your color choices and photo it makes a lovely presentation. This piece sends a strong message. Well done! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging review, very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

A very inspirational double-Nonet that lays out a great plan for the future.

"we plant seeds for the future
we will strive to unite mankind
we shall change, I to we, we to one" Let's hope we can.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thank you and yes let's hope we can, very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

I love nonets, they can be used so many different ways. This double nonet is excellenty done and the message of I to we is totally clear. Very well stated

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thank you, and yes the nonet is a wonderful form, very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello my friend

You are right, it would be nice if all people would be kinder to each other and realize we are all one.

Good job with the nonets.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thank you, and yes a little kindness would be great, much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from playinaround

Exceptional

A perfect poem for this time in history. The shape is perfect. I love the breakdown and the build up. a fast moving and well written poem. Love it. congratulations!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thank so very much for your wonderful review, comments, and the great stars, all are very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your double nonet is in good form syllable wise per line. I enjoyed reading it. I like how the first one expresses your thoughts, but the second changes POV as we are all in this together. Thanks for sharing. You give readers much to think about. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020

Thank you Jan, I had fun working on this one, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from bob cullen

Exceptional

The message is superb. The shape demands attention. On the first read you scan over the words, on the second read you absorb them. Reflection then brings the realisation of the absolute truth in this poem and the need for ACTION to be UNDERTAKEN.
Excellent work KAHPOT. I just read your name backwards and you are indeed a TOPHAK. I believe hack was an old term for a writer.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020

Thank you very much for your wonderful and positive comments, and I like what you made of my name-very clever****kahpot