Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

I like this and the message conveyed in it. I think that she should have picked her partner more carefully. If he or she is separated or divorced with benefits, then, you should have all of the information. It leads to less heartaches that way. It appears that she will experience and unfortunate end. This is good work and I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thanks for the thoughtful review. Not a regular Valentine story, ha ha. Cheers and Happy Valentine to you Jeffrey

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

From jilted lover to hopefully not burnt up in a fire. What a wonderfully written story and I love the picture. I wish I had a six.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thanks for your thoughtful review and phantom star. Not a regular Valentine story, I guess. Cheers.

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your flash fiction, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thanks for the review 13. Wishing you a lovely Valentine's day. Cheers.