Remembering Yesterday
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Moving On Up"A widow's journey into her relationship with her
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Comment from Sasha
I look forward to reading your book 'Remembering Yesterday' and am never disappointed. I just love the way you are writing it, full of vivid descriptions and emotion. I do hope you plan on publishing this because I plan to be first in line to buy it. Keep up the great work and as I said, I look forward to the next installment.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I look forward to reading your book 'Remembering Yesterday' and am never disappointed. I just love the way you are writing it, full of vivid descriptions and emotion. I do hope you plan on publishing this because I plan to be first in line to buy it. Keep up the great work and as I said, I look forward to the next installment.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I am so glad you are still reading and that I'm not disappointing you. That is really nice to know you would like to buy my book. I do plan to publish it, even if I have to self-publish.
Beth
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You are welcome.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
-In Background "husbands" should be husband's
-In paragraph two "to small town" should be to a small town
-In paragraph four "for a interview" should be for an interview
-In paragraph 5 "other that local county fair" should be other than a local county fair / "arm around to" should be arm around me to /"that in would" should be that it would
-In paragraph six "got really got" should be really got
--In paragraph 8 "there,we" should be there, we
-In paragraph 12 "in a pushed" should be and pushed
-In paragraph 14 "in nicer" should be in a nicer. / "in might mean" should it might mean. / "weeks" should be week's. / "afford of it's" should be afford its
-Seems this posting was ended without a complete sentence?
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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-In Background "husbands" should be husband's
-In paragraph two "to small town" should be to a small town
-In paragraph four "for a interview" should be for an interview
-In paragraph 5 "other that local county fair" should be other than a local county fair / "arm around to" should be arm around me to /"that in would" should be that it would
-In paragraph six "got really got" should be really got
--In paragraph 8 "there,we" should be there, we
-In paragraph 12 "in a pushed" should be and pushed
-In paragraph 14 "in nicer" should be in a nicer. / "in might mean" should it might mean. / "weeks" should be week's. / "afford of it's" should be afford its
-Seems this posting was ended without a complete sentence?
My reviews are mere suggestions. Feel free to use anything that offers assistance and/or chuck the whole shebang.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Wow! You really found a lot of errors in this one. I don't know if I can nominate you again but I will try. Thank you so much. I think I got them all.
Beth
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Autobiographies/biographies have always been one of my most favorite genres to read. This one recalls so many memories of what life was like in those days, which by the way, I still prefer over Modern times. Hope you don't feel like I'm nitpicking your story, just enjoying the fire out of it. Do keep posting it.
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No, I definitely don't feel like you are nit picking. I'm happy when you get on first and help me clean up the spags. It is good to know you actually like reading it as well.
