Caught on the Bayou
A 5 Line Entry21 total reviews
Comment from Bill Pinder
Now this is the first time I've heard somebody write about a romantic catch on the bayou. Great job with this creative writing about an encounter in an unexpected place. Bill
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Now this is the first time I've heard somebody write about a romantic catch on the bayou. Great job with this creative writing about an encounter in an unexpected place. Bill
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thanks,Bill. Thought I?d write from a different angle. Glad you enjoyed this piece.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sweet romantic short poem filled with passion and sensual bliss June, much enjoyed, and I felt the beating heart between these two lovers, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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A sweet romantic short poem filled with passion and sensual bliss June, much enjoyed, and I felt the beating heart between these two lovers, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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So happy you liked my piece on bayou romance! Thanks for the positive feedback. I do appreciate it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written five-line poem about the fishing expedition ends up caughting the heart that will last a lifetime together with great memories of the night in the fishing boat.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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A very well-written five-line poem about the fishing expedition ends up caughting the heart that will last a lifetime together with great memories of the night in the fishing boat.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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So happy you liked my piece on bayou romance! Thanks for the positive feedback. I do appreciate it.
Comment from royowen
I like the clever way you played with the words in this marvellous five poetry contest June, you've gone with the gone fishing theme, but not fishing for fish, well done, Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I like the clever way you played with the words in this marvellous five poetry contest June, you've gone with the gone fishing theme, but not fishing for fish, well done, Blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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So happy you liked my piece on bayou romance! Thanks for the positive feedback. I do appreciate it.
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Most welcome
Comment from Aussie
June this is a real cutie. Not so much fishing going on, more like kissing going on. captured your heart. Best wishes for the contest my friend and I enjoyed your tongue-in-cheek five line poem. XXK.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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June this is a real cutie. Not so much fishing going on, more like kissing going on. captured your heart. Best wishes for the contest my friend and I enjoyed your tongue-in-cheek five line poem. XXK.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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So happy you liked my piece on bayou romance! Thanks for the positive feedback. I do appreciate it, as well as the stars!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Beautiful poem, my friend,
Perfect syllables count 2/2/5/7/5. The presentation is beautiful. The words flow effortlessly. You did a great job.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Beautiful poem, my friend,
Perfect syllables count 2/2/5/7/5. The presentation is beautiful. The words flow effortlessly. You did a great job.
Gypsy
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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So happy you liked my piece on bayou romance! Thanks for the positive feedback. I do appreciate it.
Comment from Michele Harber
What a lovely romantic poem, fitting perfectly into the line and syllable requirements of the 5 Line Poem. This is an interesting take on the prompt, and I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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What a lovely romantic poem, fitting perfectly into the line and syllable requirements of the 5 Line Poem. This is an interesting take on the prompt, and I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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So happy you liked my piece on bayou romance! Thanks for the positive feedback. I do appreciate it.
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You're very welcome. I have to admit, the last time I was on the bayou, I was not thinking about romance. I was thinking about our tour guide not getting eaten by the alligator he was feeding!
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your dramatic, 5-Line love poem and the parallel artwork you selected. I liked your setting the scene "on the Bayou" in your title as well. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I admired your dramatic, 5-Line love poem and the parallel artwork you selected. I liked your setting the scene "on the Bayou" in your title as well. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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So happy you liked my piece on bayou romance! Thanks for the positive feedback. I do appreciate it.
Comment from Sally Law
So do I. A lovely offering and in the pinky-red bougainvillea. Mine are coming to bloom already and just in time for more kisses.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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So do I. A lovely offering and in the pinky-red bougainvillea. Mine are coming to bloom already and just in time for more kisses.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally xo
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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So happy you liked my piece on bayou romance! Thanks for the positive feedback. I do appreciate it.
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading this poem. All the lines are aligned and rhyme. I think that this poem has a chance of winning the contest! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I have enjoyed reading this poem. All the lines are aligned and rhyme. I think that this poem has a chance of winning the contest! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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So happy you liked my piece on bayou romance! Thanks for the positive feedback. I do appreciate it.
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You're welcome.
