Springtime Was My Muse
Does Spring inspire you to write?28 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
My - we see so many different forms. I like your poem for its simplicity and also a fine message of what Spring does for you. For me, one muse is the wind in our pines, a warmer breeze, etc.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
  |
My - we see so many different forms. I like your poem for its simplicity and also a fine message of what Spring does for you. For me, one muse is the wind in our pines, a warmer breeze, etc.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
-
I am delighted you like this form, Gail. Many thanks for sharing SPRINGTIME and your kind praise.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, this is a lovely entry to the Spring....lovely Spring contest. Well worded with good use of metaphor in 'for she would be a sprinkling can.' A beautiful picture that reflects your words - good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
|
Hello anon, this is a lovely entry to the Spring....lovely Spring contest. Well worded with good use of metaphor in 'for she would be a sprinkling can.' A beautiful picture that reflects your words - good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
-
Tank you so much, Dorothy, for your kind praise of SPRINGTIME.
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Yes, Spring does inspire me to write. Your rhyming scheme works well, and the image you chose - beautifully portrays the bountiful life and vibrant spark Spring brings to us writers, each and every year. Thank God for it and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
|
Yes, Spring does inspire me to write. Your rhyming scheme works well, and the image you chose - beautifully portrays the bountiful life and vibrant spark Spring brings to us writers, each and every year. Thank God for it and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
-
It is nice to hear Spring inspires you, too. Many thanks for sharing SPRINGTIME and your kind praise.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Springtime Was My Muse", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a delight to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post. To me,this is definitely a six.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
 |
"Springtime Was My Muse", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a delight to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post. To me,this is definitely a six.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
-
I am deeply honored you like SPRINGTIME so much, Duchess. Many thanks for sharing and for that galaxy of bright stars.
Dear Anon,
You're very welcome.
Take care and God bless,
the Duchess !(-_-)!
Comment from Janet Foor
I love the picture. It could be a picture of one of my friends and her garden complete with her cat.
I am looking forward to Spring but I have no idea what inspires me to write. The last thing I wrote was about Alcatraz. Go figure. :))))
A enjoyed your "Hazel".
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
|
I love the picture. It could be a picture of one of my friends and her garden complete with her cat.
I am looking forward to Spring but I have no idea what inspires me to write. The last thing I wrote was about Alcatraz. Go figure. :))))
A enjoyed your "Hazel".
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
-
I am so pleased you enjoyed my hazel. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last. Yes there is something about spring time that makes you feel alive Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
|
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last. Yes there is something about spring time that makes you feel alive Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
-
I am delighted you enjoyed SPRINGTIME, Cookie. Many thanks for sharing.
-
It was my pleasure.
cookie
Comment from Bichon
I really liked the personification of spring, it really made the poem come to life and have realistic themes in it, great job! You have also used a unique form pattern to compliment your writing which worked well!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
|
I really liked the personification of spring, it really made the poem come to life and have realistic themes in it, great job! You have also used a unique form pattern to compliment your writing which worked well!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
-
I am delighted you enjoyed the unique form of my poem, Bichon. It was fun to try.
Comment from Susan Larson
Spring, the time of rebirth, the time of new birth within the garden. The time of Resurrection in any way you want to interpret it. How fitting that The Resurrection happened in the Spring.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
|
Spring, the time of rebirth, the time of new birth within the garden. The time of Resurrection in any way you want to interpret it. How fitting that The Resurrection happened in the Spring.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
-
Thank you very much for sharing SPRINGTIME WAS MY MUSE, Susan.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
I never read a poem with the hazel pattern. It is very good. I have read a lot of spring poems today and yours is one of the better ones. The presentation is nice. Good job.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
|
Hello, my friend,
I never read a poem with the hazel pattern. It is very good. I have read a lot of spring poems today and yours is one of the better ones. The presentation is nice. Good job.
Gypsy
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
-
The hazel is fairly unique and I have not seen another on FanStory. I am delighted you like mine.
Comment from Therese Caron
This is a beautiful poem about spring, perfect for the spring prompt contest. It is as though you wanted spring to arrive, so you decided to make it arrive on your own. You welcomed her arrival, And coaxed her along until your vibrant colors all appeared. Beautiful work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
|
This is a beautiful poem about spring, perfect for the spring prompt contest. It is as though you wanted spring to arrive, so you decided to make it arrive on your own. You welcomed her arrival, And coaxed her along until your vibrant colors all appeared. Beautiful work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
-
Thank you very much, Therese, for your high praise of SPRINGTIME WAS MY MUSE. Indeed I look forward to Spring's arrival every year.
