Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

So many will resonate with this as they give or have given their hearts the moment they lay eyes on another. Falling in love at first sight, that is what I believe this piece to be about.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

You are very perceptive. I fell for my future husband the moment I laid eyes on him. Thank you so much for reading.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello my friend

Fine entry for the six words contest. The word count is right. The presentation is nice and appropriate for the poem. Good job

Gypsy ð???

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem..Its so good to hear from you. :)

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

This is cute with the picture of the heart with the EKG readout! Being a nurse, those kinds of things stick out at us in the profession. I also liked the poem. The whole entry was bright and festive! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
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 Comment Written 24-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Thank you for reading. My oldest daughter is studying to be a nurse...it's a tough job! She is doing well though in her clinicals. Thanks again.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 writing prompt.
This short verse tells of giving away your heart.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020

I gave mine away 40 years ago, and he was smart to take it..lol.. Thank you so much for reading. :)

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello Mystery Writer!
Hah! I can relate! I always tell my husband that he did two truly "smart" things in his life:
a. Buy the property I suggest he purchase.
b. Marry me! :)

Loved your sentiments!

Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020

Sometimes they need to be remined once in awhile as well .lol. Thank you for this nice review.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Yes, we certainly hope it's the smart choice! ;) A great offering for this extremely limited formatting -- great job! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020

Thank you..I really appreciate hearing from you, as I value your opinions. :)

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

You've written an excellent poem for the 1-6-1 contest
but it requires three end rhymes and you only have two.
health/wealth. If you don't edit it will likely be disqualified.
Otherwise it is a very fine poem and saying.
Good luck in the contest
Robert

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020

Thank you for pointing that out. I wrote a completely different poem in order to correct it. Thank you so much.

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

It sounds like there is definitely a rhyming trio with heart, start, smart. Attractive graphic indeed. It sounds like you got the syllable count right, 100%. Good luck in that contest. Nice share!

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020

Thank you for the nice review. Unfortunately I didn't read the rules correctly and had to completely change the poem.If you have time please read it. Thanks again.

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

Cute little poem which well meets the contest requirements. I enjoyed reading this and the rhyme worked well. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest voting.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020

Thank you for reading. I really appreciate it.