Moonlit Dreams
a 1-6-1 poem5 total reviews
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Oh, how lovely. Which came first, the picture or the poem? I want to go floating down that stream. Congratulations on your first-place finish. It was well deserved.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Oh, how lovely. Which came first, the picture or the poem? I want to go floating down that stream. Congratulations on your first-place finish. It was well deserved.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Hi Darlene. So grateful for your review and encouraging words. The poem came first and I got lucky with the whimsical art. :). Thank you.
Melissa
Comment from Cindy Decker
Hi, your poem has so many things for an 8-syllable poem: rhyme and really good imagery for starters. A beautiful thought//the water is not in a hurry like take the journey to happiness. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Hi, your poem has so many things for an 8-syllable poem: rhyme and really good imagery for starters. A beautiful thought//the water is not in a hurry like take the journey to happiness. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thanks so much Cindy.
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Sugar ray, thank you for the wonderful review. I am new to this site, and I still make some mistakes. A belated thank you for the nice review.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet I gave you your 5 th vote.
Your fantasy entry for some reason reminded me of Atreyu and Falkor and his quest to save Fantasia from the devouring Nothing.
Atreyu to succeed must find the " cure " to save the Child Princess who is dying.
WhenAtreyu dies, Bastion , the boy who is reading the book magically becomes part of the story itself ....he saves the Princess by giving her a new name : Moon Child, and with his imagination he recreates Fantasia.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Ciao mystery poet I gave you your 5 th vote.
Your fantasy entry for some reason reminded me of Atreyu and Falkor and his quest to save Fantasia from the devouring Nothing.
Atreyu to succeed must find the " cure " to save the Child Princess who is dying.
WhenAtreyu dies, Bastion , the boy who is reading the book magically becomes part of the story itself ....he saves the Princess by giving her a new name : Moon Child, and with his imagination he recreates Fantasia.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Wow, Franca... what a neat review. Thank you.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with very good imagery and three solid external rhymes
plus the extra internal rhyme. A lot to put into such
a short poem. Well done.
Excellent art work to match
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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You've written an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with very good imagery and three solid external rhymes
plus the extra internal rhyme. A lot to put into such
a short poem. Well done.
Excellent art work to match
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Dancemom
This is a well-written poem for the 161 contest. You have told a sweet magical story through your words. Nice set of rhymes.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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This is a well-written poem for the 161 contest. You have told a sweet magical story through your words. Nice set of rhymes.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you.
