Museum Trip
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Comment from RShipp
A well chosen picture for your poem! Great job!
The telling of your story in its poetic form was nicely done.
I remember being able to 'sit in the car' at different places for rides or for pictures. What lovely memories.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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A well chosen picture for your poem! Great job!
The telling of your story in its poetic form was nicely done.
I remember being able to 'sit in the car' at different places for rides or for pictures. What lovely memories.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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I miss being young! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Memories writing prompt.
This well written verse tells us of memories of a special family day.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Memories writing prompt.
This well written verse tells us of memories of a special family day.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review!
Comment from Stephanie Paige
I enjoyed reading this poem. Your picture is beautiful and from your words I can visualize your memory. It is definitely a treasure. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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I enjoyed reading this poem. Your picture is beautiful and from your words I can visualize your memory. It is definitely a treasure. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your kind words and nice review :)
Comment from Minglement
Very nice entry for the Memories Writing prompt contest. You chose a great photo that immediately sets the mood and captures the reader's interest. Well told touching story. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Very nice entry for the Memories Writing prompt contest. You chose a great photo that immediately sets the mood and captures the reader's interest. Well told touching story. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you for this very nice review. :)
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Oh my goodness! You are so adorable with your pouty face! What a lovely poem you have written about this bittersweet memory. I'm glad this photo brings back fond memories of your mom and brother (even with this injustice ! Lol) thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Oh my goodness! You are so adorable with your pouty face! What a lovely poem you have written about this bittersweet memory. I'm glad this photo brings back fond memories of your mom and brother (even with this injustice ! Lol) thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review and those dazzling 6 stars. :)
Comment from BethShelby
It is so nice you had a mother who was eager to show her children the world around them. I didn't have a brother but I do understand the feeling of not getting your way and how you might be feeling slighted. I love the picture and I know your treasure it. You've written a lovely poem about this experience. Great entry for the contest.
Beth
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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It is so nice you had a mother who was eager to show her children the world around them. I didn't have a brother but I do understand the feeling of not getting your way and how you might be feeling slighted. I love the picture and I know your treasure it. You've written a lovely poem about this experience. Great entry for the contest.
Beth
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thank you for such a
Nice review and for your kind words. :)
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
But you were so cute! Even pouting, you were adorable. I can tell that you're over the disappointment of not being able to drive the train... maybe?
It sounds like a wonderful time at the museum with your family, and I'm sure you wish you could have them back again. These memories are so precious and your poem is beautiful, in rhyme and in its content. You called it a "memory-making day," and that's exactly what it was!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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But you were so cute! Even pouting, you were adorable. I can tell that you're over the disappointment of not being able to drive the train... maybe?
It sounds like a wonderful time at the museum with your family, and I'm sure you wish you could have them back again. These memories are so precious and your poem is beautiful, in rhyme and in its content. You called it a "memory-making day," and that's exactly what it was!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thank you for reading and for this lovely review! :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A magical poem filled with memories of Chicago and family who always add that sparkle to life, your memories here are fond and welcoming, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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A magical poem filled with memories of Chicago and family who always add that sparkle to life, your memories here are fond and welcoming, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thank you. I really miss my family, even after all these years. I appreciate your kind words.
