Going Home
On this journey20 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is so beautiful . I Love the way it flows the rhyming scheme is excellent. Such beautiful
Words. She didn't see the hidden wings perhaps it didn't matter. She only saw her earthly shell bloody, bent and shattered. She took his hand reluctant to leave this world behind. Scared and yet excited of what it was she'd find. She enters through the brilliant light with no regrets or fear. Exceptional piece of writing.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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This is so beautiful . I Love the way it flows the rhyming scheme is excellent. Such beautiful
Words. She didn't see the hidden wings perhaps it didn't matter. She only saw her earthly shell bloody, bent and shattered. She took his hand reluctant to leave this world behind. Scared and yet excited of what it was she'd find. She enters through the brilliant light with no regrets or fear. Exceptional piece of writing.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you, this is such a wonderful review. It means a lot to me. :)
Comment from John Cole
This was an incredible poem. The way you used descriptive words painted a picture in my mind as I was reading. I also liked the message you gave in that we are all God's children and this is just one stop along our journey. Very good work and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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This was an incredible poem. The way you used descriptive words painted a picture in my mind as I was reading. I also liked the message you gave in that we are all God's children and this is just one stop along our journey. Very good work and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review, I'm so glad you like it.
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
a lovely poem that is both hopeful and inspirational! You've used some beautiful as well as stark imagery to effectively contrast the accident with the aftermath of heaven.
Excellent job
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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a lovely poem that is both hopeful and inspirational! You've used some beautiful as well as stark imagery to effectively contrast the accident with the aftermath of heaven.
Excellent job
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you for such a great review, it made my day. :)
Comment from Veenbee
Excellent poem. Congratulations on being the contest winner. I like your description of earth being a pit stop, and that the he talking to her was an angel. Nicely done. Veenbee
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Excellent poem. Congratulations on being the contest winner. I like your description of earth being a pit stop, and that the he talking to her was an angel. Nicely done. Veenbee
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you for this lovely 6 star review, it made my day. :)
Comment from Wils
A well deserved winner of the Start and End contest. This poem has beautiful rythm and rhyme and contains a very good message. Congratulations.
Geoff
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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A well deserved winner of the Start and End contest. This poem has beautiful rythm and rhyme and contains a very good message. Congratulations.
Geoff
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this wonderful 6 star rating. It brightened my day. :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Congratulations on winning first place with this beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your words flow smoothly with great rhymes. The imagery is excellent, too. Your image choice is perfect to pair with your well-thought out poem. The message is super--all souls have a place in Heaven if they ask for forgiveness for they did or did not do while on Earth. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Congratulations on winning first place with this beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your words flow smoothly with great rhymes. The imagery is excellent, too. Your image choice is perfect to pair with your well-thought out poem. The message is super--all souls have a place in Heaven if they ask for forgiveness for they did or did not do while on Earth. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this great review...It's always great to hear from my fellow writers.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Boogienights,
A beautiful poem with a wonderful message to all.
Excellent rhymes, smooth rhythm, and it ends right where it began,
the circle complete.
Congratulations on the win!
Best wishes to you.
Robert
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Hello Boogienights,
A beautiful poem with a wonderful message to all.
Excellent rhymes, smooth rhythm, and it ends right where it began,
the circle complete.
Congratulations on the win!
Best wishes to you.
Robert
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review and the 6 stars. It really made my day brighter. :)
Comment from Ogden
Congratulations for the first place finish, Boogienights!
Your poem has an excellent visual presentation, is quite inspirational, and well deserving of its win.
Don
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Congratulations for the first place finish, Boogienights!
Your poem has an excellent visual presentation, is quite inspirational, and well deserving of its win.
Don
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your kind words and good wishes. :)
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You are very welcome.
Don
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about our time on earth is just a temporary home. When it is time we will be taken up in to our eternal home where there is n heartache, pain, or tears.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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A very well-written poem about our time on earth is just a temporary home. When it is time we will be taken up in to our eternal home where there is n heartache, pain, or tears.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you. I'm so pleased you read my poem.
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is a very good poem that highlights your skill as a poet and your depth of understanding of both the intricacy of human nature and the intimacy of the best relationship between God and the human race.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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This is a very good poem that highlights your skill as a poet and your depth of understanding of both the intricacy of human nature and the intimacy of the best relationship between God and the human race.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your kind words and this wonderful 6 star rating. I always appreciate fellow poets taking the time to read my work. :)
