Clowns of the Sea
A Tyburn entry3 total reviews
Comment from Aphthong
Excellent write.. You create a vivid imagery with that lines.. I never got an opportunity to see dolphins clashing splashing in the sea.. But in a pool I saw them doing the trick.. Wonderful creatures..
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Excellent write.. You create a vivid imagery with that lines.. I never got an opportunity to see dolphins clashing splashing in the sea.. But in a pool I saw them doing the trick.. Wonderful creatures..
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this fun piece! Thanks for dripping by.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-You have followed all
of the rules very well.
-Good descriptive words
and syllable count.
-I like the topic, and your
descriptive lines about
the "playful dolphins"
and the "waves thrashing."
-Very well done; good luck!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-You have followed all
of the rules very well.
-Good descriptive words
and syllable count.
-I like the topic, and your
descriptive lines about
the "playful dolphins"
and the "waves thrashing."
-Very well done; good luck!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for dropping by!
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You are welcome.
Comment from RodG
It is hard to imagine dolphins not leaping playfully. Your tyburn--and that marvelous picture--captures the essence of what makes them fun to watch. Good choice of participles to convey action. Rod
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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It is hard to imagine dolphins not leaping playfully. Your tyburn--and that marvelous picture--captures the essence of what makes them fun to watch. Good choice of participles to convey action. Rod
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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I appreciate your encouraging feedback!
