My Daughter's Escape
5-7-5 Poetry Contest Entry5 total reviews
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
A fascinating, very beautiful little 5-7-5 poem. It tells a whole story and speaks to the fantasy of the reader. Plus a wonderful image! Congrats, I loved it!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
A fascinating, very beautiful little 5-7-5 poem. It tells a whole story and speaks to the fantasy of the reader. Plus a wonderful image! Congrats, I loved it!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
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So welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I really enjoyed these few words as children who read books go on a magical journey and ride with the dragons, a poignant and entertaining write and for me this is a winner, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
I really enjoyed these few words as children who read books go on a magical journey and ride with the dragons, a poignant and entertaining write and for me this is a winner, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Dolly. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind words. Have a wonderful night.
Comment from RShipp
You have followed the requirements for a haiku-type composition.
Your picture was well chosen for your 5-7-5.
I love to disappear into books as well.
Best of luck in the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
You have followed the requirements for a haiku-type composition.
Your picture was well chosen for your 5-7-5.
I love to disappear into books as well.
Best of luck in the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, RS. I really appreciate the good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a lovely short poem that is a respectable contest entry. It describes how books can capture a child's imagination. The picture works well with it. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
This is a lovely short poem that is a respectable contest entry. It describes how books can capture a child's imagination. The picture works well with it. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Susan. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
Comment from Natalie Goodwin
Your poem vividly describes the beauty of getting lost in the world of a good book. I love the imagery of the elfin queen riding a dragon. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
Your poem vividly describes the beauty of getting lost in the world of a good book. I love the imagery of the elfin queen riding a dragon. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Natalie. I'm glad you liked the piece.