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Remembering Yesterday

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A widow's journey into her relationship with her

14 total reviews 
Comment from Sankey
Exceptional
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Wow! What a chap0ter this was. A real mix of dramas and anxiety all round. My shorts fell down in the car park at a shopping centre about 6 months ago but I had some incontinence pants on under them so all was well. One spag. She had written to a[n] christian college

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much for the six star rating and you comments. That's funny about the pants incident. My slip fell off from under my dress in the church parking lot. These things happen.
    Beth
reply by Sankey on 02-Mar-2020
    Yeah, Bleah!
Comment from forestport12
Excellent
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Beth, I hope to do this myself, as I want my children and theirs to know the hardships we endured and lived on love and faith. I like how you narrate the story. Sometimes folk can be over the top, but sometimes telling it in a simple straightforward way is best. The scene with the fire downstairs had me jumping! Keep up the worthy work.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much for the reviw and for the nice comments. You should do this. I think everyone should. Especially people like you are such excellent writers.
    Beth
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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I just love your writings! Got to the end of this one and laughed out loud. You have wonderful memories, and I am so glad you are writing them down. Love watching your life unfold.

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 Comment Written 01-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
    Thank you for reading and I enjoy your positive comments.
    Beth
Comment from Begin Again
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Family in general can take a toll on other family members, but toss in one in serious need of a care taker and the pot really begins to boil. Back then the man always thought he was in charge and a few carried it way to far...I was brought up by one of those so I relate well to your story. Smiles and hugs!

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 Comment Written 01-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
    Thank you for the review and I enjoyed your comments. Dad got a little more mellow as he aged.
    Beth