Golden Anniversary
a 3-5-3 contest entry12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Golden Anniversary, has the proper formatting and marks the fifty years that love has endured. Not an easy task today. Nice.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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This 3-5-3, Golden Anniversary, has the proper formatting and marks the fifty years that love has endured. Not an easy task today. Nice.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, Bill, for this very uplifting review. Rod
Comment from pome lover
good thoughts, happy feeling, neat poem, -
loved the accompanying picture - perfect.
Got a feeling this is personal. Hope so.
Best of luck in the contest.
pome lover
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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good thoughts, happy feeling, neat poem, -
loved the accompanying picture - perfect.
Got a feeling this is personal. Hope so.
Best of luck in the contest.
pome lover
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, pome lover. Yes, this is personal. My wife and I celebrated our 50th anniversary in December.
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Ah! the husband wrote it! even better!
well, congratulations and best wishes to you both!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a poignant tribute to relationships that have wintered & summered with resiliency. There is no bitterness or lasting regrets. There is new life with each individual. This is an invitation for the reader to reflect upon their relationships. Well expressed.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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This is a poignant tribute to relationships that have wintered & summered with resiliency. There is no bitterness or lasting regrets. There is new life with each individual. This is an invitation for the reader to reflect upon their relationships. Well expressed.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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I am so glad to see your comments, Liz. Indeed, I hope my short poem will cause readers to reflect upon their relationships. Many thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from Ogden
Your poem is uplifting, evidence that what it celebrates still is achievable.
Congratulations on your long, happy marriage!
A golden anniversary is quite an .accomplishment.
:o)
Ogden (don)
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Your poem is uplifting, evidence that what it celebrates still is achievable.
Congratulations on your long, happy marriage!
A golden anniversary is quite an .accomplishment.
:o)
Ogden (don)
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Don. Yes, we celebrated our 50th in December.
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That's terrific!
You're very welcome.
Don
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
a 3-5-3 contest entry
Golden Anniversary
Hello my friend
Great job with the syllable count. The presentation is beautiful. The words flow easily. Nice topic of everlasting love.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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a 3-5-3 contest entry
Golden Anniversary
Hello my friend
Great job with the syllable count. The presentation is beautiful. The words flow easily. Nice topic of everlasting love.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, Gypsy, for sharing my short poem
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt.
This short piece tells of years spent together being Spring.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt.
This short piece tells of years spent together being Spring.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Sharon, for your kind praise.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very lovely. Sharing endless love with a special person is something everyone wants and wishes for. Nicely composed and illustrated. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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This is very lovely. Sharing endless love with a special person is something everyone wants and wishes for. Nicely composed and illustrated. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Marilyn, for the very kind praise.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Nice sentiment; perhaps fresher imagery? Endless Spring and Years Shared Together are common expressions. With only a few words, you gotta give a good punch. Cheers. LIZ
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Nice sentiment; perhaps fresher imagery? Endless Spring and Years Shared Together are common expressions. With only a few words, you gotta give a good punch. Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing my poem and your suggestions.
Comment from Puzzle
I love this. Endless spring is a great way to look at love. Always making it new. Never letting it die. That's exactly how love should feel. I love the picture you Chose as well. It is fitting
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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I love this. Endless spring is a great way to look at love. Always making it new. Never letting it die. That's exactly how love should feel. I love the picture you Chose as well. It is fitting
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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I am excited by your enthusiastic response to my short poem. Thank you so much, Dana, for the wonderful praise and those six bright stars.
Comment from zanya
One of life's great blessings it must be to celebrate a golden wedding anniversary with one's beloved by one's side - and a beautiful pic to illustrate
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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One of life's great blessings it must be to celebrate a golden wedding anniversary with one's beloved by one's side - and a beautiful pic to illustrate
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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It truly is one of life?s blessings. Many thanks for sharing my shortie, zanya.
