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Daydreams

My favourite pastime

5 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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This 3-5-3, Daydreams, has the proper formatting and notes that one can be Mr. Fantastic or even zit free in one's imagination.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
    Many thanks Bill. Much appreciated. Stay safe. Jen
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I will definitely vote for this one. Plus I will have to give you A+. The reader will be drawn in with this message. However, there could be a challenge for the reader to reflect on which daydream they will make real. This is a great topic. Well thought out.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much for the great review and stars. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Excellent
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So absolutely true! Yes, we create our own world in daydreams and nothing is impossible. In such limited words a whole story!. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
    Than, you so much Marjon.
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 10-Mar-2020
    Welcome!
Comment from Susan X Smith
Excellent
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This is a cute and respectable entry for the contest. You convey a true and clear message in just a few words. Best of all, daydreaming is fun. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
    Many thanks.
Comment from Onixxiya
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

A perfect 3-5-3, flowing and to be honest you couldn't find a more ideal meaning for a group of writers to consider.

People strive for lucid dreams, but daydreams empower to a similar degree. Love this.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much for the great review and stars. Much appreciated.