Honey Pot
1 6 1 poem entry12 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
Congratulations on winning the writing competition. Give yourself a pat on your back. Well done. I like your post as well. Thanks for sharing! Awesome.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Congratulations on winning the writing competition. Give yourself a pat on your back. Well done. I like your post as well. Thanks for sharing! Awesome.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much!
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You're welcome.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet. I gave you your 4 th vote.
I'm a bee lover, I love to watch them collect pollen and nectar... at times when they have a full load they struggle to stay steady ..
" dusty feet" really appealed to me ...( smile)
It's ashame that 70 % off the bee population has died �due to pollution , climate change etc..
Without them we will die too.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Ciao mystery poet. I gave you your 4 th vote.
I'm a bee lover, I love to watch them collect pollen and nectar... at times when they have a full load they struggle to stay steady ..
" dusty feet" really appealed to me ...( smile)
It's ashame that 70 % off the bee population has died �due to pollution , climate change etc..
Without them we will die too.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this short piece! Thank you for sharing your insights.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Good syllable count and presentation. You delivered a clear message with only eight syllables...that is quite a challenge. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Hello, my friend,
Good syllable count and presentation. You delivered a clear message with only eight syllables...that is quite a challenge. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this short piece! Thank you for sharing your insights.
Comment from lyenochka
Nicely done rhymes in this super brief poetic form. And I especially liked the "Fruitage of dusty feet" - with the created word and the alliteration plus just adding to the image of the bee with his feet dusty with pollen. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Nicely done rhymes in this super brief poetic form. And I especially liked the "Fruitage of dusty feet" - with the created word and the alliteration plus just adding to the image of the bee with his feet dusty with pollen. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your positive thoughts!
Comment from w.j.debi
Aren't bees one of the most wonderful creatures ever created? They do so much for us as they pollinate and then make honey. They are also so fun to watch as long as there are only a few of them flying around.
Great job with the prompt.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Aren't bees one of the most wonderful creatures ever created? They do so much for us as they pollinate and then make honey. They are also so fun to watch as long as there are only a few of them flying around.
Great job with the prompt.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from LisaMay
This is a lovely presentation with good rhyming choices to show a bee's pollination journey... with honey the result. You have portrayed it with awesomely effective simplicity.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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This is a lovely presentation with good rhyming choices to show a bee's pollination journey... with honey the result. You have portrayed it with awesomely effective simplicity.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this short piece. I love honey and wanted to highlight the bee's important role in producing this sweet treat!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fine presentation as this bee is spreading the joy here and doing its best to keep the cycle of life going, spring is almost here too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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This is a fine presentation as this bee is spreading the joy here and doing its best to keep the cycle of life going, spring is almost here too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this short piece. I love honey and wanted to highlight the bee's important role in producing this sweet treat!
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent poem for the 1-6-1 contest
with the required three rhymes.
Those pollen-coated feet will soon be honey.
Great picture to match your poem.
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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You've written an excellent poem for the 1-6-1 contest
with the required three rhymes.
Those pollen-coated feet will soon be honey.
Great picture to match your poem.
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this short piece. I love honey and wanted to highlight the bee's important role in producing this sweet treat!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Love the allusion to the manner in which the poor little guys get all covered in pollen as they collect the nectar for their (our!!) honey! :) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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LOL!! Love the allusion to the manner in which the poor little guys get all covered in pollen as they collect the nectar for their (our!!) honey! :) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this short piece. I love honey and wanted to highlight the bee's important role in producing this sweet treat!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 Poem contest.
This short piece is a good match for the amazing picture.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 Poem contest.
This short piece is a good match for the amazing picture.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this short piece. I love honey and wanted to highlight the bee's important role in producing this sweet treat!
