Honey Pot
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Comment from RodG
This short poem is memorable because of how you used a bee as a metaphor for Hope. But please reread the prompt directions. ALL THREE LINES MUST RHYME. Rod
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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This short poem is memorable because of how you used a bee as a metaphor for Hope. But please reread the prompt directions. ALL THREE LINES MUST RHYME. Rod
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this short piece. I love honey and wanted to highlight the bee's important role in producing this sweet treat!
Comment from victor 66
This is a very nice take on words. People that truly enjoy nature and the love of others, I don't know what could be "sweeter" than that. I think if most people thought this way, the world might be a better place. Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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This is a very nice take on words. People that truly enjoy nature and the love of others, I don't know what could be "sweeter" than that. I think if most people thought this way, the world might be a better place. Best wishes.
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
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You're welcome, you're welcome, Jhammond. June.
