Revelations of Age
Would that we could always hold on to the fairies...52 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
I'm with you--they are fairies in disguise no matter what everyone else is claiming. Only the true believers see what is actually there. Mere moths, indeed. Tsk.
This is an excellent cinquain.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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I'm with you--they are fairies in disguise no matter what everyone else is claiming. Only the true believers see what is actually there. Mere moths, indeed. Tsk.
This is an excellent cinquain.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Amen, Sister!! ;) :) Fairies and imps and oh-my-goodness did you see the tiny dragon-kits? :) ;) Thank you so much, W.J., for both the review and simply because your support is wonderful!! :) Of course, you know why I'm so late, but I do apologize!! Gonna get on top of this soon and be back to a 'new normal' .... I am an optimist! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bill Pinder
Well, you have definitely taken a bold stance as a fairy lover. You are definitely an expert at writing about fairies and other unusual creations as in your story about the gardens. Keep on dreaming then writing. Bill
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Well, you have definitely taken a bold stance as a fairy lover. You are definitely an expert at writing about fairies and other unusual creations as in your story about the gardens. Keep on dreaming then writing. Bill
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Well, a girl's gotta stand up for some of her good buddies, you know?!!;) :) LOL! Thank you so much, Bill, for both the review and simply because your support is wonderful!! :) Of course, you know why I'm so late, but I do apologize!! Gonna get on top of this soon and be back to a 'new normal' .... I am an optimist! ;) Yvette
Comment from Craigitar
Very nice! I like the liberal sprinkling of alliteration through out the poem as well as the change in perception of fairies to moths--very well done! Unfortunately, the magic of a moment can too often can be dulled by the mundane. Good poem! Luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Very nice! I like the liberal sprinkling of alliteration through out the poem as well as the change in perception of fairies to moths--very well done! Unfortunately, the magic of a moment can too often can be dulled by the mundane. Good poem! Luck with the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, Craigitar!! ;)
I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
Comment from royowen
I like this one, I think you could be right about moths, and if they see a fairy perhaps there needs to be testing booth for eyes like the corona virus heh heh. This is an excellent cinquain Yvette, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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I like this one, I think you could be right about moths, and if they see a fairy perhaps there needs to be testing booth for eyes like the corona virus heh heh. This is an excellent cinquain Yvette, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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What about imps? :) LOL!! ;) Thank you so much, Roy, for both the review and simply because your support is wonderful!! :) Of course, you know why I'm so late, but I do apologize!! Gonna get on top of this soon and be back to a 'new normal' .... I am an optimist! ;) Yvette
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Well done
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Revelations of Age", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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"Revelations of Age", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, Duchess -- your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;)
I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
Comment from poetwatch
So Yvette, you see the fairies flit before your eye? I believe you. I also saw things out of this world but no one believed me, they laughed... so I wrote it down. At least I would know and remember. This is a good entry for the Cinquain Poetry contest. :)
P. S. I hope the fairies weren't those in your classroom. :) ;)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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So Yvette, you see the fairies flit before your eye? I believe you. I also saw things out of this world but no one believed me, they laughed... so I wrote it down. At least I would know and remember. This is a good entry for the Cinquain Poetry contest. :)
P. S. I hope the fairies weren't those in your classroom. :) ;)
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Shhhh.... I try not to let too many people know cuz it's not just fairies...lol!! ;) Thank you so much, Jose, for both the review and simply because your support is wonderful!! :) Of course, you know why I'm so late, but I do apologize!! Gonna get on top of this soon and be back to a 'new normal' .... I am an optimist! ;) Yvette
Comment from Drew Delaney
Ah, how sweet! That note I mean. The poem is especially good but the moths spoiled it for me. I hate moths.
Better to see fairies than moths is my motto! LOL
Best wishes in the contest.
Drew xx
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Ah, how sweet! That note I mean. The poem is especially good but the moths spoiled it for me. I hate moths.
Better to see fairies than moths is my motto! LOL
Best wishes in the contest.
Drew xx
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Oh, sorry 'bout the moths, my lady!! ;) ;) Thanx so much for the review, Drew!! ;)
I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Beautiful! You can see fairies? Oh, I knew you were a special kind! Or maybe they are tiny angels bestowing the wonderful qualities you possess!
Lovely my friend! xoxo
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Beautiful! You can see fairies? Oh, I knew you were a special kind! Or maybe they are tiny angels bestowing the wonderful qualities you possess!
Lovely my friend! xoxo
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Fairies and other things... but I try to keep those secrets to myself...lol!! ;) :) Thank you so much, Lady Diana, for both the review and simply because your support is wonderful!! :) Of course, you know why I'm so late, but I do apologize!! Gonna get on top of this soon and be back to a 'new normal' .... I am an optimist! ;) Yvette
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again, my friend, no need for apologies - ever! xoxoxo
Comment from LisaMay
Let's hold on to our illusions for as long as possible! With a childlike sense of imagination and wonder we can keep some magic in our lives. We are getting an overdose of harsh reality lately - keep dreams and fantasy as a softening comfort.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Let's hold on to our illusions for as long as possible! With a childlike sense of imagination and wonder we can keep some magic in our lives. We are getting an overdose of harsh reality lately - keep dreams and fantasy as a softening comfort.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Yes!!! I do so agree! :) Thank you so much, LisaMay, for both the review and simply because your support is wonderful!! :) Of course, you know why I'm so late, but I do apologize!! Gonna get on top of this soon and be back to a 'new normal' .... I am an optimist! ;) Yvette
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
Delightful poem with your f- and m-letter alliterations sprinkled about. Your last line is wonderful. Do these fairies sprinkle fairy dust too, or just flit about? LOL
Good contest entry for sure.
Matk
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Yvette,
Delightful poem with your f- and m-letter alliterations sprinkled about. Your last line is wonderful. Do these fairies sprinkle fairy dust too, or just flit about? LOL
Good contest entry for sure.
Matk
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, Mark!! ;)
I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
