It's Time That We Begin
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Comment from pharp
Mystery Poet,
This is such a beautiful poem and a message that all should read and take heed. We all must do our part in the fight against this virus. Your words are gentle, kind and brings a sense of peace within ones soul... If we pray and band together... this too shall pass. Thanks so much for sharing, I am sure this poem has given many HOPE. The very best to you in the contest.
Blessings...Portia
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Mystery Poet,
This is such a beautiful poem and a message that all should read and take heed. We all must do our part in the fight against this virus. Your words are gentle, kind and brings a sense of peace within ones soul... If we pray and band together... this too shall pass. Thanks so much for sharing, I am sure this poem has given many HOPE. The very best to you in the contest.
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you for this great review and the six stars...it means a lot to me. Stay safe.
Comment from samandlancelot
I like your belief that we will pass the test we face today, together, and we will see a bright and NEW future. We don't through these things without changes taking place in us.
Patricia
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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I like your belief that we will pass the test we face today, together, and we will see a bright and NEW future. We don't through these things without changes taking place in us.
Patricia
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and for your thoughtfil review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Beautifully written and well said. I love you message of positivity and hope. This is just what I needed to hear during these tough times. Great job and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Beautifully written and well said. I love you message of positivity and hope. This is just what I needed to hear during these tough times. Great job and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you for this fantastic rating!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I think this is a good entry for the "repetition" contest. It reaches all the technical requirements, but in addition it is a positive viewpoint on the current situation. In my opinion this sort of writing can help us at the moment.
The only stanza that I would reconsider is the first. This has the repetition at a different position to all the others, breaking the pattern and flow, but more importantly it is extremely negative.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the "repetition" contest. It reaches all the technical requirements, but in addition it is a positive viewpoint on the current situation. In my opinion this sort of writing can help us at the moment.
The only stanza that I would reconsider is the first. This has the repetition at a different position to all the others, breaking the pattern and flow, but more importantly it is extremely negative.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your review! I appreciate your feedback.
Comment from Drew Delaney
An awesomely written poem with good repetitive lines. Yes, we need to help each other but we have to isolate too so that the virus is contained. Well done.
Drew
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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An awesomely written poem with good repetitive lines. Yes, we need to help each other but we have to isolate too so that the virus is contained. Well done.
Drew
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your kind review. :)
