Hope
Hope Haiku10 total reviews
Comment from samandlancelot
I like your picture of the hand reaching for the shore. We cling to hope because it's all we have sometimes. It's our only light.
Nice.
Patricia
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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I like your picture of the hand reaching for the shore. We cling to hope because it's all we have sometimes. It's our only light.
Nice.
Patricia
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like the message of this and the well thought out way you've presented hope to us. That's exactly what we need to do. Keep trusting, reaching, believing and placing our hope in the Lord. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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I like the message of this and the well thought out way you've presented hope to us. That's exactly what we need to do. Keep trusting, reaching, believing and placing our hope in the Lord. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Beautiful 5/7/5 hope poem contest entry. The presentation is awesome. The syllable count is good. A good connection between lines. Good luck with the contest.
gypsy
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Hello, my friend,
Beautiful 5/7/5 hope poem contest entry. The presentation is awesome. The syllable count is good. A good connection between lines. Good luck with the contest.
gypsy
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
I like your arrangement where the first and last lines are about hope and the middle line expresses what our hope is about or what our hope is fighting against. Really well written with a wonderful art choice.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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I like your arrangement where the first and last lines are about hope and the middle line expresses what our hope is about or what our hope is fighting against. Really well written with a wonderful art choice.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from QC Poet
Yes, difficult to let it go. Remember; Isaiah 41:10 KJV, So do not fear, for I am with you; do not be dismayed, for I am your God. Stay, Safe, Healthy and Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Yes, difficult to let it go. Remember; Isaiah 41:10 KJV, So do not fear, for I am with you; do not be dismayed, for I am your God. Stay, Safe, Healthy and Blessings to you.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written 5-7-5 poem about hope. You used very good descriptive and very true words. I love the art work you chose too. Thanks for sharing. May God bless you! Teri
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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This is a very beautiful and very well written 5-7-5 poem about hope. You used very good descriptive and very true words. I love the art work you chose too. Thanks for sharing. May God bless you! Teri
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Michele Harber
What a lovely expression of the importance of hope, and how it can get us through despair. The background color is vibrant and uplifting, and fits well with the image of hope being "our only light." Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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What a lovely expression of the importance of hope, and how it can get us through despair. The background color is vibrant and uplifting, and fits well with the image of hope being "our only light." Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a respectable contest entry, keeping as it does to the concept of "hope" and the Haiku format. The rhyme scheme works well, as does the picture you chose to complement the words.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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This is a respectable contest entry, keeping as it does to the concept of "hope" and the Haiku format. The rhyme scheme works well, as does the picture you chose to complement the words.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from zanya
Yes this restricted format of the 5-7-5 captures very well the role that Hope plays in our earthly existence - a light in the darkness of impending despair
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Yes this restricted format of the 5-7-5 captures very well the role that Hope plays in our earthly existence - a light in the darkness of impending despair
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku poem about hope. We can only be prepared for the worst and hope that we will not have to face the threat at all. But when it comes our way have faith and trust that it will pass.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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A very well-written haiku poem about hope. We can only be prepared for the worst and hope that we will not have to face the threat at all. But when it comes our way have faith and trust that it will pass.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.