Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Exceptional

I just wanted to say that I loved this poem. It is so beautiful in a completely modern sense and finding something beautiful in something so sad and worrying is a true gift. well done kindest regards Meiax

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your response to my poem.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is a well written piece. Good play on words with "paneful." Alliteration is equally good in lines one and three. Sums up the isolation we may all feel with the present circumstances. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020

Thanks for reviewing!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 3-5-3, Enduring Self-isolation, has the proper formatting and makes good use of the punny window references as you bemoan the social distancing posture.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020

Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Wonderful play on words to deliver your vision of solitude in just 10 syllables -- great job for the contest!! :) :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020

Thank you!

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt.
This short piece tells of being in solitude during the virus.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020

Thank you!

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Probably this is how my friend feels :"Windowed world:
paneful solitude's
dull glazed gaze."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Monica Chaddick

Excellent

Loved your poem and artwork. I especially liked the word play with "paneful" vs "painful". A true use of poetry. I like how you brought up the gaze and she is gazing out of the window. I think at this point we can all feel what she is feeling.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020

Thank you for your review. It seems we are mostly all under house arrest.

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Exceptional

Fresh and clever indeed! Windowed world (alliteration!) Paneful (wordplay) and glazed gaze-- both alliteration and wordplay. I rarely give 6-stars but this merits no less. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020

Thank you for this appreciative review, which I in turn appreciate. Lucky me, nabbing one of your hard-to-earn 6s.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

You have summed up this solitude so wonderfully well in this excellent 3-5-3 poem, your artwork and words give us all the image of solitude, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020

Thank you! It will be a test of endurance for many. Thank heavens I enjoy writing.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Enduring self-isolation

Hello my friend,

Your 3/5/3 has the right amount of syllables and a pretty picture presentation. The lines connect well and that facilitates flow. Good alliteration.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020

Thanks for your positive review.