Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Despite reliving memories of your deceased husband, blessings you ever find, but heartache continues your daughter is in coma; life goes on in sorrows and a bit of hopeful happiness; curious sorrowful ending; I liked the work, well said, well done; thank you for sharing this; you may gift me any $ MD and help me make a Premier Shield upgraded member.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020

Thank you again for the review and comments. I don't know what you mean by $ MD??

reply by Alcreator Litt Dear on 20-Mar-2020

I am in the process of getting a Premier Shield Upgraded Member at Fanstory only on payment of life and beyond membership Fee $249 MD but I need $100 MD (Member Dollars) so I requested you to gift me any amount $ MD, as in want of about $ 100 MD I am unable to become a Premier Shield Upgraded member for if I ever become a PS member all my All Time Best Works (99.99% of my entire posts published at Fanstory) will be shown on my portfolio for about 100 years in my survival and after my death and readers can read my works at their convenience for all works may not be available in any specific book I publish later, I need not tell you more about this, for you are already published writer.


I write only on God and God's works.

I held Rank # 1 Reviewer for years at Fanstory.

Now, I am given a special membership - Reviewer Member, in addition to my Premier Author status.


Please never mind, and do not take it otherwise, I am glad to write, I have $ Member Dollars in 1000s I earned by writing reviews but Fanstory does not allow those MD for PS membership as they say, those MD are exclusively meant for my personal use for raising my new posting at Fanstory.


If you really think to gift me $ MD and gift me you may gift the purchased $ MD and load the same to my account and use the same $ MD for my PS membership.


I am freely and gladly can gift you about $ 1,000 MD from my account and you may use the same $ MD for raising your new works or posting at Fanstory.


Thank you for the enquiry.


If you never mind, I would wish to make, keep and grow a relation with you as your youngest brother, making you my eldest sister (as true Fanstory Member), if you so wish.


With the kindest personal regards,
Wishing you every success in your chosen career in writing,


Yours affectionately,

Daniel, 20/03/2020 Friday Night

PS Please excuse me if I have written here anything that hurts you anyway

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020

Thanks for explaining . I don't know why they won't let you use your member dollars if you could use mine that doesn't make sense. I do have a lot I need member dollars for right now, but If I get any extra we'll see. I been copying my writing back to my computer and saving it on discs The only thing missing is the pictures.

reply by Alcreator Litt Dear on 21-Mar-2020

I asked the same question to Tom, the head or administrator of Fanstory, as you know, he is a shrewd businessman, he directly refused me to accept the $ Member Dollars from my account, he pleaded that $ Members Dollars I earned by writing reviews are not acceptable at any cost, all $ Member Dollars purchased from Fanstory will be accepted by Fanstory for fee for Premier Shield Upgraded membership and for Premier Author or for General Membership of Fanstory.


If you have ever used your $ Member Dollars that you earned by writing reviews for the purpose of payment of membership fee of Fanstory, please let me know, I shall be pleased to give your reference and my problem for payment of fee for Premier Shield Upgraded membership will be solved and I need not approach to members requesting for sending me gifts.


Alternatively, you may approach and write to Tom of Fanstory about using your own earned $ Member Dollars from your account toward payment of membership fee and let me know the result or experience you gain, and getting favourable response that is in case Tom allows you to use of your earned Member Dollars for payment of membership etc, and I may also write with a request to accept my $ Member Dollars from my account for my Premier Shield Upgraded membership.


As you know, already I mentioned in my previous PM, I have earned huge and huge amount of Member Dollars by writing reviews at FS.


Hope, I have explained your question or doubt satisfactorily.


With the kindest personal regards,


Affectionately yours,


Daniel, 21/03/2020, Saturday afternoon

reply by Alcreator Litt Dear on 21-Mar-2020

I asked the same question to Tom, the head or administrator of Fanstory, as you know, he is a shrewd businessman, he directly refused me to accept the $ Member Dollars from my account, he pleaded that $ Members Dollars I earned by writing reviews are not acceptable at any cost, all $ Member Dollars purchased from Fanstory will be accepted by Fanstory for fee for Premier Shield Upgraded membership and for Premier Author or for General Membership of Fanstory.


If you have ever used your $ Member Dollars that you earned by writing reviews for the purpose of payment of membership fee of Fanstory, please let me know, I shall be pleased to give your reference and my problem for payment of fee for Premier Shield Upgraded membership will be solved and I need not approach to members requesting for sending me gifts.


Alternatively, you may approach and write to Tom of Fanstory about using your own earned $ Member Dollars from your account toward payment of membership fee and let me know the result or experience you gain, and getting favourable response that is in case Tom allows you to use of your earned Member Dollars for payment of membership etc, and I may also write with a request to accept my $ Member Dollars from my account for my Premier Shield Upgraded membership.


As you know, already I mentioned in my previous PM, I have earned huge and huge amount of Member Dollars by writing reviews at FS.


Hope, I have explained your question or doubt satisfactorily.


With the kindest personal regards,


Affectionately yours,


Daniel, 21/03/2020, Saturday afternoon
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Comment from royowen

Excellent

Being a parent I know how hard it is to have a sick child, and as Jesus took our place, I have a vague idea how God felt, committing my punishment to Him. Our children only had the normal children's maladies, but they were bad enough, God bless you for sharing this, wonderful write, blessings, Roy
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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020

Thank you so much for the review and comments. Yes this is hard to have a sick child. I don't know how people who don't have God in their lives get though times like this. Thanks for picking up the spag.
Beth

reply by royowen on 20-Mar-2020

Me neither Beth.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh Beth! What a grueling time. Giving birth and caring for a newborn is stressful enough but to have her so sick right away! I hope she recovers - you'll let us know soon. I was really surprised that you husband was allowed to be with you the whole time. What year was this? When we had our first baby in 1982, my husband was asked to leave when they decided to do a C-section. An 8-lb 2 oz baby and you hardly gained much weight!

Comments/Suggestions:
"She invited you and I " (me) - direct object of invited - but this grammar rule isn't really followed these days.
"followed rabbit tracts leading " (tracks)
"but weighted several ounces less " (weighed)


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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020

Thank you so much for the review and the comments. Either you missed something or I did. I'll go back and check. He was with me until they took me to delivery and then he had to wait. I thought I said he wasn't allowed in the delivery room. I meant to. He was back with me in recovery when I woke up. This was 1960. Anyway I will have the followup chapter soon.
Beth
Thank you for finding things that needed attention. I fixed them.

reply by lyenochka on 20-Mar-2020

I missed that-you wrote that he was sent to the waiting room. How hard it must have been to be pacing and waiting!