The Solitary Piper
The stirring skirl of the pipes in the mountains. (6 words)13 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
You used your words well--love the braying bagpipes and the stirring skirl--learned a new word today, thanks to you and Google. You are wise to take advantage of title and subtite in such a short poem. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
You used your words well--love the braying bagpipes and the stirring skirl--learned a new word today, thanks to you and Google. You are wise to take advantage of title and subtite in such a short poem. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Thanks. "Skirl" has rather limited possibilities for use.
Comment from Bill Schott
This seven-word poem, The Solitary Piper, has the right number of words in it and evokes the sense of sadness and nostalgia as the pipes play across the valley.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
This seven-word poem, The Solitary Piper, has the right number of words in it and evokes the sense of sadness and nostalgia as the pipes play across the valley.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your few words allowed by the prompt in this vividly descriptive one-liner. You made effective word choices and used great artwork,
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
You have made excellent use of your few words allowed by the prompt in this vividly descriptive one-liner. You made effective word choices and used great artwork,
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thanks for this terrific review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Beautiful poem and presentation. Good word count. Great grammatical connection and flow. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
Hello my friend
Beautiful poem and presentation. Good word count. Great grammatical connection and flow. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy ð???
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thanks for this generous review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I can hear the sounds of the bagpipes here and your few words presented a very Scottish presentation here and your words are impactful, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
I can hear the sounds of the bagpipes here and your few words presented a very Scottish presentation here and your words are impactful, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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I've been to Glencoe and there was a piper there - it was so atmospheric.
Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
You have put lovely words strung together, and then found the perfect picture. Purple is a favorite color of mine too. It got my attention right off the bat. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
You have put lovely words strung together, and then found the perfect picture. Purple is a favorite color of mine too. It got my attention right off the bat. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for this terrific review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written seven word poem about the solitary Piper blueing the bag pipes from high in the mountain so that the sounds go over the valleys for all to hear.
A very well-written seven word poem about the solitary Piper blueing the bag pipes from high in the mountain so that the sounds go over the valleys for all to hear.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
Comment from Shirley McLain
I like your poem and you made a beautiful presentation for it. I did not find a single error. If I had a six it would be yours. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
I like your poem and you made a beautiful presentation for it. I did not find a single error. If I had a six it would be yours. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-You have used your
six words well.
-Effective imagery
and alliteration.
-You create a vivid
word picture of the
playing of the bagpipes
in the colorful twilight.
-Good luck in the contest.
-Nice image and
presentation.
-You have used your
six words well.
-Effective imagery
and alliteration.
-You create a vivid
word picture of the
playing of the bagpipes
in the colorful twilight.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow - your words alone elicit both audible melodies and beautiful visions... I've always just loved the word 'gloaming' because of the strength of it meaning in both the sound of the word and the appearance!! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
Wow - your words alone elicit both audible melodies and beautiful visions... I've always just loved the word 'gloaming' because of the strength of it meaning in both the sound of the word and the appearance!! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020