Unforgettable
1 6 1 syllables poem9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1 poem, Unforgettable, has the right number of words in it and notes the items kept close at hand to link the present with the loved but absent past.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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This 1-6-1 poem, Unforgettable, has the right number of words in it and notes the items kept close at hand to link the present with the loved but absent past.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your positive feedback!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
1 6 1 syllables poem
Treasured
Hello, my friend,
dear
memories we keep near
cheer ............................. three lines rhyme and good syllable count. Well done. I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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1 6 1 syllables poem
Treasured
Hello, my friend,
dear
memories we keep near
cheer ............................. three lines rhyme and good syllable count. Well done. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author. The art is a super pairing with your thoughtful words. Great job with the contest prompt. The art pairs nicely with your loving words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author. The art is a super pairing with your thoughtful words. Great job with the contest prompt. The art pairs nicely with your loving words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Debbie Pope
Last night, I spent way too much time trying to compose a poem for this contest. So, I know how hard it is to do a good job under those limitations.
Your poem makes perfect sense. I like that it is one complete thought. I don't like the ones where the third line just summarizes the first two, although I have certainly done my share of those.
Yours makes sense, and it's words are true and meaningful.
Nice job.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Last night, I spent way too much time trying to compose a poem for this contest. So, I know how hard it is to do a good job under those limitations.
Your poem makes perfect sense. I like that it is one complete thought. I don't like the ones where the third line just summarizes the first two, although I have certainly done my share of those.
Yours makes sense, and it's words are true and meaningful.
Nice job.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your encouraging feedback. Poetry has been a good distraction for me, but my muse does not always cooperate!
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I know the feeling.
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I think my muse has sequestered herself.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with three very good rhymes and exact syllables.
A very nice theme of mementos that that bring comfort.
Wonderful art work to match your words.
Well done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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You've written an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with three very good rhymes and exact syllables.
A very nice theme of mementos that that bring comfort.
Wonderful art work to match your words.
Well done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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We need all the comfort we can get these days! Thanks for sharing your positive feedback.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, how many of these do we have 'hanging' round the house...? ;) ;) Countless, yeah?! ;) A wonderful offering for the contest - best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Oh, how many of these do we have 'hanging' round the house...? ;) ;) Countless, yeah?! ;) A wonderful offering for the contest - best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Mementos can be comforting these days. We can reminisce about happier times...
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
How perceptive you are! I, too, keep treasured mementos near for they do bring me cheer when I remember and reflect upon days gone by and loved ones...
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer,
How perceptive you are! I, too, keep treasured mementos near for they do bring me cheer when I remember and reflect upon days gone by and loved ones...
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Memories of happier times can get us through these difficult moments. We just need to stay positive!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Mementos are good reminders, we keep them near us, but glamour by degrees shade but love and romance would not; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Mementos are good reminders, we keep them near us, but glamour by degrees shade but love and romance would not; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from RodG
I can easily relate to this poem now that I am forced to stay inside. My office is filled with "mementoes" I treasure. Just seeing them makes me sentimental. Good job conveying your message in only 8 syllables. Rod
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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I can easily relate to this poem now that I am forced to stay inside. My office is filled with "mementoes" I treasure. Just seeing them makes me sentimental. Good job conveying your message in only 8 syllables. Rod
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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When the future looks uncertain, we tend to treasure and appreciate the past a little more. Thanks for taking the time to share your sentiments.
