Isolation
This is surreal9 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Yes these twenty five words say it all - how our life has now changed beyond recognition - wonder how we will emerge from this isolation - wiser? happier ?
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Yes these twenty five words say it all - how our life has now changed beyond recognition - wonder how we will emerge from this isolation - wiser? happier ?
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Many thanks. Jen
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Many thanks. Jen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
This is surreal
Isolation
Hello, my friend,
Good word count. I like your presentation. You are right, our present situation is surreal. Well throughout the poem about the coronavirus. Good luck.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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This is surreal
Isolation
Hello, my friend,
Good word count. I like your presentation. You are right, our present situation is surreal. Well throughout the poem about the coronavirus. Good luck.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Many thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are true words and of course we are all in the same boat and must obey the rules to save our own lives and the lives of others so that this virus does not spread, keep the hope in your heart, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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These are true words and of course we are all in the same boat and must obey the rules to save our own lives and the lives of others so that this virus does not spread, keep the hope in your heart, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thanks Dolly
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Easy rhythm and rhyme--not even necessary for this contest! You summed up the situation succinctly. As for me, I remain defiantly unconfined (may use that phrase myself in a poem one of these days). Nice work. Art too. I've used several of his/hers myself. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Easy rhythm and rhyme--not even necessary for this contest! You summed up the situation succinctly. As for me, I remain defiantly unconfined (may use that phrase myself in a poem one of these days). Nice work. Art too. I've used several of his/hers myself. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Many thanks Liz
Comment from Puzzle
Oh I like this a lot!!! I can feel the anxiety of the writer through the way you wrote it.
No more fun.....that is so true! Ugh. I'm going stir crazy! Lol. Oh well more time to write! Right? Lol. Good work!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Oh I like this a lot!!! I can feel the anxiety of the writer through the way you wrote it.
No more fun.....that is so true! Ugh. I'm going stir crazy! Lol. Oh well more time to write! Right? Lol. Good work!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Re-invent it!! Make your 'gathering' online using Hangouts or Zoom or something until this all 'blows over'.... because it WILL blow over! :) Great offering for the contest - good luck! ;)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Re-invent it!! Make your 'gathering' online using Hangouts or Zoom or something until this all 'blows over'.... because it WILL blow over! :) Great offering for the contest - good luck! ;)
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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I am going to a party on zoom for the first time. Can't wait. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
This is good. I liked the poem, I liked the flow, I liked the wording and the message. I liked the illustration very much too.
Maybe the poem is not so surreal, but the situation right now sure is!
An actual, very good poem. Thank you. I pray that we will come out of this safe and sound. And that we can be social and responsible human beings again.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This is good. I liked the poem, I liked the flow, I liked the wording and the message. I liked the illustration very much too.
Maybe the poem is not so surreal, but the situation right now sure is!
An actual, very good poem. Thank you. I pray that we will come out of this safe and sound. And that we can be social and responsible human beings again.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the great revue and super 6*s
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Comment from kintesiegel1
It's hard to convey a feeling through only 25 words but this poem concretely achieves it and it has an impact. An example of what we are all feeling to one degree or another.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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It's hard to convey a feeling through only 25 words but this poem concretely achieves it and it has an impact. An example of what we are all feeling to one degree or another.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thanks
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-five-word poem, Isolation, has the right word count and gives a glimpse of the new, temporary reality we face in order to slow down the virus.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This twenty-five-word poem, Isolation, has the right word count and gives a glimpse of the new, temporary reality we face in order to slow down the virus.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thanks Bill
