Simple Pleasures
An Acrostic Poem12 total reviews
Comment from Drew Delaney
It is definitely trying times. Not sure who are the prejudiced here in that line. Are you referring to China. I am a home body too, but this is not what I ever imagined. Well written.
Drew
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It is definitely trying times. Not sure who are the prejudiced here in that line. Are you referring to China. I am a home body too, but this is not what I ever imagined. Well written.
Drew
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I believe that crisis situations bring out the hearts of people and it's contents. It brings out the best and the worst as you've so eloquently stated. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I believe that crisis situations bring out the hearts of people and it's contents. It brings out the best and the worst as you've so eloquently stated. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic, SIMPLE PLEASURES, follows the vertical theme and suggests that we find the hidden joys that lay unseen and unappreciated all around.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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This acrostic, SIMPLE PLEASURES, follows the vertical theme and suggests that we find the hidden joys that lay unseen and unappreciated all around.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from BeasPeas
Nice job with this acrostic. When we're forced by circumstance to live with less, more simply, we find that it's okay. We can take joy in small things we may have otherwise overlooked. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Nice job with this acrostic. When we're forced by circumstance to live with less, more simply, we find that it's okay. We can take joy in small things we may have otherwise overlooked. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This nice, simple acrostic poem tells enjoying simple things is not easy enough, we do not know how to enjoy even simple and little matter at our pleasures by controlling our stand and levels of frustrations; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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This nice, simple acrostic poem tells enjoying simple things is not easy enough, we do not know how to enjoy even simple and little matter at our pleasures by controlling our stand and levels of frustrations; well said, well done.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Gypsymooncat
This is a wonderful acrostic that read like a rhymer. I enjoyed the message it delivers, especially the mention of children as models; they are truly adaptive and inspirational in their way.
I'm glad I still had a six to award this, because anything less would've been an insult!
Good luck in the votes xoxoxo
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This is a wonderful acrostic that read like a rhymer. I enjoyed the message it delivers, especially the mention of children as models; they are truly adaptive and inspirational in their way.
I'm glad I still had a six to award this, because anything less would've been an insult!
Good luck in the votes xoxoxo
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your insightful reply and generous rating!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful spelling out of the things to ward against and ways to combat them in these trying times... Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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A wonderful spelling out of the things to ward against and ways to combat them in these trying times... Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Puzzle
Yes there's just a lot of chaos going on right now. People need to relax. We need to stick together not fight each other. This is such a serious situation. Good work and well written.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Yes there's just a lot of chaos going on right now. People need to relax. We need to stick together not fight each other. This is such a serious situation. Good work and well written.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from zanya
Yes an Acrostic echoing where we are at with our confinement and our new normal since this nasty virus hit - some of the inconveniences we now endure - hopefully we will make it safely through to a changed world !
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Yes an Acrostic echoing where we are at with our confinement and our new normal since this nasty virus hit - some of the inconveniences we now endure - hopefully we will make it safely through to a changed world !
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you! We can only hope with everyone cooperating that this will all end soon!
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "Everyone - just take a breath
Peace is still within our reach", because calmness of mind especially in a crisis is always the best option!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
1 Thessalonians 5:15 New International Version (NIV)
15 Make sure that nobody pays back wrong for wrong, but always strive to do what is good for each other and for everyone else.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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My favorite part was, "Everyone - just take a breath
Peace is still within our reach", because calmness of mind especially in a crisis is always the best option!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
1 Thessalonians 5:15 New International Version (NIV)
15 Make sure that nobody pays back wrong for wrong, but always strive to do what is good for each other and for everyone else.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for sharing your insightful comments!
