Nagged To Death
The day hubby kicked the bucket16 total reviews
Comment from JudyE
Oh poor Bob - and now you'll have to find someone else to do the painting. Good luck in the humorous song contest. I hope it does well. And I believe we have our first case of coronavirus in our small town although we haven't heard officially yet.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Oh poor Bob - and now you'll have to find someone else to do the painting. Good luck in the humorous song contest. I hope it does well. And I believe we have our first case of coronavirus in our small town although we haven't heard officially yet.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your good wishes.
We are now in lockdown here. I think very few communities will be spared the infection.
Good luck, be well.
Comment from visionary1234
Oh this is a good one, Lisa! (Now I want to hear you SING it!) Rhyming 'fuckit' with kick the 'bucket' is priceless and definitely brought me a big giggle. Well done!!!
:):):):)Sharyn
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Oh this is a good one, Lisa! (Now I want to hear you SING it!) Rhyming 'fuckit' with kick the 'bucket' is priceless and definitely brought me a big giggle. Well done!!!
:):):):)Sharyn
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Glad i didn't offend your sensitivities with that word, but I would surely offend your ears if I tried to sing my silly poem!
Thank you so much for the terrific review.
Comment from Louise Michelle
LOL - I was thinking this is so cool, it's written like a song. Then I saw the writing contest below. No wonder it reads like a song, haha.
Well, girl, this was so much fun to read. It's a breath of fresh air reading some dirty words instead of all the depressing virus stuff. I just finished reading Lena's posting about asses, but I do believe that's one word she neglected to put in her piece, haha. Oh, I call her Lena, but everyone else calls her Helen. What can I say? She seems like a Lena to me. I always did march to the beat of a different drummer. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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LOL - I was thinking this is so cool, it's written like a song. Then I saw the writing contest below. No wonder it reads like a song, haha.
Well, girl, this was so much fun to read. It's a breath of fresh air reading some dirty words instead of all the depressing virus stuff. I just finished reading Lena's posting about asses, but I do believe that's one word she neglected to put in her piece, haha. Oh, I call her Lena, but everyone else calls her Helen. What can I say? She seems like a Lena to me. I always did march to the beat of a different drummer. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your brilliant assessment of my poem/song lyrics.
I knew you would be able to handle the odd dirty word.
(Lena seems so much more suitable than Helen, it's a wonder she doesn't call herself that too.)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, dear, Bob is quite the husbin specimen, isn't he? LOL!! ;) This is a great one for the contest, my lady -- it flows wonderfully and has biting sarcasm woven in to keep at least the ladies smiling... ;) :) Best of luck at the polls! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Oh, dear, Bob is quite the husbin specimen, isn't he? LOL!! ;) This is a great one for the contest, my lady -- it flows wonderfully and has biting sarcasm woven in to keep at least the ladies smiling... ;) :) Best of luck at the polls! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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The power play between this couple endured did death did them part.
Thanks for your review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Nagged To Death
by LisaMay
Hello, Lisa,
I hope this is fiction LOL it's pretty funny. I think you will do well in the contest. Poor husband and the wife was kind of a bitch. Well written.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Nagged To Death
by LisaMay
Hello, Lisa,
I hope this is fiction LOL it's pretty funny. I think you will do well in the contest. Poor husband and the wife was kind of a bitch. Well written.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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It's fiction at my house (no hubby) but maybe it happened somewhere. Nagging is quite common because of lazy partners.
Thanks for your review.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Super job on the rhyme scheme here. It sounds like the wife had the last word, but she missed out on more than she bargained for. I think it has a sassy kind of tone to it. Dry humor times five. Thanks for posting, and funny cartoon to accompany it.
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Super job on the rhyme scheme here. It sounds like the wife had the last word, but she missed out on more than she bargained for. I think it has a sassy kind of tone to it. Dry humor times five. Thanks for posting, and funny cartoon to accompany it.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Not a happy camper! Yet, from what I read there was nothing that would make her a happy camper. I cannot imagine anyone could live with themself with such a thick and sick attitude. Good portrayal.
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Not a happy camper! Yet, from what I read there was nothing that would make her a happy camper. I cannot imagine anyone could live with themself with such a thick and sick attitude. Good portrayal.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
Comment from Pantygynt
I would love to hear this one sung.
Song lyrics are strange things and depending on the musical genre may well not follow the poetic rules of metre -- aren't you lucky? Perhaps it should be called 'Mixed Feelings'
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I would love to hear this one sung.
Song lyrics are strange things and depending on the musical genre may well not follow the poetic rules of metre -- aren't you lucky? Perhaps it should be called 'Mixed Feelings'
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
Comment from Michele Harber
This is so funny, Lisa May, and a further reminder to never get on your bad side. I absolutely love your wry sense of humor, and your rhymes are perfectly chosen. If it really existed, I'd definitely add this song to my playlist. Good luck in the contest, my friend. xoxoxo
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This is so funny, Lisa May, and a further reminder to never get on your bad side. I absolutely love your wry sense of humor, and your rhymes are perfectly chosen. If it really existed, I'd definitely add this song to my playlist. Good luck in the contest, my friend. xoxoxo
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
Comment from royowen
A very quirky and entertaining post, the poor nagged and beaten hubby, who gave his life pleasing the unpleasable wife, I know how he feels being a hubby, where the two genders operate in an age old way. Unless the learn to be gracious and accepting, it simply Doesn't work. Fortunately I have a wife who's very graciously wise, blessings Lisa, you've done a great job, well done, blessings, Roy
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A very quirky and entertaining post, the poor nagged and beaten hubby, who gave his life pleasing the unpleasable wife, I know how he feels being a hubby, where the two genders operate in an age old way. Unless the learn to be gracious and accepting, it simply Doesn't work. Fortunately I have a wife who's very graciously wise, blessings Lisa, you've done a great job, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
