Divine Path
A 15 syllable contest poem...5 total reviews
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
I really enjoyed reading your poem. The syllable count is perfect, and I also liked your word choice. The picture is also perfect, as it matches the wording of your poem. Good luck in the contest!!! xoxo
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. The syllable count is perfect, and I also liked your word choice. The picture is also perfect, as it matches the wording of your poem. Good luck in the contest!!! xoxo
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thanks sweetie! I?m so happy you appreciate these words. xoxo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Not always as easy as it sounds, yeah? ;) :) A great offering for the contest that give the smile we all need right now! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Not always as easy as it sounds, yeah? ;) :) A great offering for the contest that give the smile we all need right now! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you! We need to reflect on the gloom if we want to stay safe, but we need the sunshine to know we are going to get through it. Appreciate you liked it!
Comment from gingermo
A three line poem of hope imaginatively expressed. 'reach for the divine path,' I feel is wise advice in these unprecedented times. The last two lines succinctly express that though we live in troubled times His light is always there to guide us. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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A three line poem of hope imaginatively expressed. 'reach for the divine path,' I feel is wise advice in these unprecedented times. The last two lines succinctly express that though we live in troubled times His light is always there to guide us. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much! Your kind words are appreciated!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an uplifting few words that we all need right now as there is too much doom and gloom about, I enjoyed your faithful and pleasing poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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This is an uplifting few words that we all need right now as there is too much doom and gloom about, I enjoyed your faithful and pleasing poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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We sure do need uplifting! Spring is in the air in spite of this terrible virus, but hard to see the forest for the trees sometimes.
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Beautiful piece. I especially liked the artwork that you have selected here. This is a lovely, inspiring and very encouraging piece. I'm certain that your readers will appreciate this work. Good job!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Beautiful piece. I especially liked the artwork that you have selected here. This is a lovely, inspiring and very encouraging piece. I'm certain that your readers will appreciate this work. Good job!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much! we all need to know He is here and will lead us through.
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