Moody Artist
It's doggone depressing.11 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Please, PLEASE bring on the light... sooner! ;) :) A great offering for the contest that give the smile we all need right now! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
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Please, PLEASE bring on the light... sooner! ;) :) A great offering for the contest that give the smile we all need right now! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
Comment from Seraphim Delphinium
Very clever word play! "His dark worse than his bright." Loved this! And yes, let's hope this all "will lighten up soon!!" Take care and stay safe, Seraph ~
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Very clever word play! "His dark worse than his bright." Loved this! And yes, let's hope this all "will lighten up soon!!" Take care and stay safe, Seraph ~
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
Comment from BeasPeas
This is wonderful. A welcome diversion from the corona virus poems, although that's what on my mind and everyone's. Your cute little doggy and play on words are a delight. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
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This is wonderful. A welcome diversion from the corona virus poems, although that's what on my mind and everyone's. Your cute little doggy and play on words are a delight. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend,
A beautiful poem and an awesome presentation. I love it. I think you will do well in the contest. Good syllable count. Good luck.
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Hello my friend,
A beautiful poem and an awesome presentation. I love it. I think you will do well in the contest. Good syllable count. Good luck.
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifteen-syllable poem, Moody Artist, has the right syllable count and paints the PUN into the canvas that represents all we know and love about art.
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This fifteen-syllable poem, Moody Artist, has the right syllable count and paints the PUN into the canvas that represents all we know and love about art.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
So clever. Witty and whimsical. Love the word-play--indeed you did it doggy-style. So nice to see such a short piece that packs a punch in a lighthearted manner--too many downers these days. Cheers right back at you. LIZ
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So clever. Witty and whimsical. Love the word-play--indeed you did it doggy-style. So nice to see such a short piece that packs a punch in a lighthearted manner--too many downers these days. Cheers right back at you. LIZ
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like your topic and
the description.
-The play on words
in line two is very good.
-I like how you use art
as a symbol of moods at
the current time, and
end with the promise of hope.
-Well done! Good luck in the contest.
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like your topic and
the description.
-The play on words
in line two is very good.
-I like how you use art
as a symbol of moods at
the current time, and
end with the promise of hope.
-Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an excellent entry for the 15 syllable contest, meeting all requirements. The picture is charming, and it is a fitting complement to the words. Thanks for sharing.
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This is an excellent entry for the 15 syllable contest, meeting all requirements. The picture is charming, and it is a fitting complement to the words. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I really enjoyed these clever words here, very inventive and I think this presentation is positive and hopeful and also entertaining as it made me smile, I reckon this is a winner and you stole my last six stars of the week! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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I really enjoyed these clever words here, very inventive and I think this presentation is positive and hopeful and also entertaining as it made me smile, I reckon this is a winner and you stole my last six stars of the week! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Woohoo! So pleased I nabbed your last 6 - thanks very much for such a positive review.
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "Moody artist,
his dark worse than his bright,", because I read that part and then looked up at the picture and saw what you did there! Very clever!
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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My favorite part was, "Moody artist,
his dark worse than his bright,", because I read that part and then looked up at the picture and saw what you did there! Very clever!
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your nice review! woof woof.
