You (acrostic)
5-7-5 Romance Poem Contest Entry4 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
What a wonderful song /poem earning your sweet touch,
Obsession guides my reason
Until you are mine.
Good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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What a wonderful song /poem earning your sweet touch,
Obsession guides my reason
Until you are mine.
Good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Iza. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful weekend.
Ron
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Well written 5/7/5 poem for the 5/7/5 romance contest. I like the presentation. The syllable count is right. The lines are connected and flow well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hello my friend
Well written 5/7/5 poem for the 5/7/5 romance contest. I like the presentation. The syllable count is right. The lines are connected and flow well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, Gypsy. I really appreciate the good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from LisaMay
This works really well as an obsessive acrostic: YOU. The fixation comes across very clearly, where the yearning overpowers all reason.
I fear however that once the desired result is achieved the obsession is over. Until you are mine -- and then what?
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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This works really well as an obsessive acrostic: YOU. The fixation comes across very clearly, where the yearning overpowers all reason.
I fear however that once the desired result is achieved the obsession is over. Until you are mine -- and then what?
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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And then she goes and makes him a sandwich. lol
Thank you for this awesome review, Lisa. I'm you liked my little contest offering.
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hahaha...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine passionate acrostic filled with that yearning we feel when we need and want someone and can't live without them, it is an obsession, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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A fine passionate acrostic filled with that yearning we feel when we need and want someone and can't live without them, it is an obsession, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and gracious stars, Dolly. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
