Envious Eyes
A Senryu on Jealousy13 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Senryu or human Haiku clearly speaks about the state and effect of jealousy, often this nature is self-destructive, well said, well done; thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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This Senryu or human Haiku clearly speaks about the state and effect of jealousy, often this nature is self-destructive, well said, well done; thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from amada
This is a very acurate three lines poem, they say fealousy is our worst enemy. Your words bring a reality to a shadow that we try to ignore. Very good description and classy artwork.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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This is a very acurate three lines poem, they say fealousy is our worst enemy. Your words bring a reality to a shadow that we try to ignore. Very good description and classy artwork.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from w.j.debi
Excellent alliteration in envious eyes and spews self-destructive. Spew is a great word choice as it evokes a strong image of action.
Love the artwork with the dueling dragons.
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Excellent alliteration in envious eyes and spews self-destructive. Spew is a great word choice as it evokes a strong image of action.
Love the artwork with the dueling dragons.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
