Gilding the Clouds
Look for the silver lining.19 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have done an excellent job of fulfilling the prompt, conveying a powerful, uplifting message about life after the pandemic. YES! We have to look for those silver linings; they ARE there. You have a misspelled word in line 17.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
  |
You have done an excellent job of fulfilling the prompt, conveying a powerful, uplifting message about life after the pandemic. YES! We have to look for those silver linings; they ARE there. You have a misspelled word in line 17.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
-
Thank you for the review and the comments. Thanks also for pointing out the misspelling.
Beth.
Comment from Bichon
This was a sufficiently encouraging and positive poem to read! Honestly reading it did comfort me a little, so excellent job with that! I truly hope you are doing well and that the silver lining will appear soon x
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
 |
This was a sufficiently encouraging and positive poem to read! Honestly reading it did comfort me a little, so excellent job with that! I truly hope you are doing well and that the silver lining will appear soon x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
-
Thank you so much for the review and comments. I'm glad you got some comfort from this. I'm doing fine and I hope you are as well.
Beth
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Things are definitely changing. There are some good things coming from this and a lot of self awareness that I never thought we've have. You did a great job with this.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
|
Things are definitely changing. There are some good things coming from this and a lot of self awareness that I never thought we've have. You did a great job with this.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
-
Thank you so much for the review and comments.
Beth
Comment from A. Willow Bends
I love the optimism of your poem. The flow of it is wonderful and the visual chosen is perfect. The overall effect is what this particular contest is all about and I think you have truly nailed it here. Good Luck. I regret not having a six. My favorite stanza is the next to last. Wonderful words of wisdom set down poetically. Great job.
Wendy
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
|
I love the optimism of your poem. The flow of it is wonderful and the visual chosen is perfect. The overall effect is what this particular contest is all about and I think you have truly nailed it here. Good Luck. I regret not having a six. My favorite stanza is the next to last. Wonderful words of wisdom set down poetically. Great job.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
-
Thank you Wendy, I really appreciate the review. Stay safe and stay positive.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Yes, we must not focus on the dark clouds for they are not stationary, but always on the move. Right now they cover us, so we hunker down. No matter what happens, God is still in control.
Great writing!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
|
Yes, we must not focus on the dark clouds for they are not stationary, but always on the move. Right now they cover us, so we hunker down. No matter what happens, God is still in control.
Great writing!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
-
Thank you, Rebecca. I appreciate the review and comments.
Stay well and keep up the faith.
-
Thank you. I will. You too.
Comment from Therese Caron
Very well written poem about life after COVID-19. I hope things will get better, the way they did after September 11, but this time we need to make this feeling of togetherness last. My favorite stanza is the second to last. All of the stanzas flow well, and the rhyming is good also.Best of luck to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
|
Very well written poem about life after COVID-19. I hope things will get better, the way they did after September 11, but this time we need to make this feeling of togetherness last. My favorite stanza is the second to last. All of the stanzas flow well, and the rhyming is good also.Best of luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
-
Thank you for the review and you comments. I agree with you. It is a time to band together and try an make it last this time.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, clear, creative and hopeful. The reader pondered on the theme of this poem. I really liked the last stanza with not focusing on the dark cloud and keep up the courage along with good advice. Thank you for a well written poem.
May you be well and safe.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
|
The author's words are engaging, clear, creative and hopeful. The reader pondered on the theme of this poem. I really liked the last stanza with not focusing on the dark cloud and keep up the courage along with good advice. Thank you for a well written poem.
May you be well and safe.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
-
Thank you so much for the review and the great comments. You stay safe and healthy. I hoping the world will be a better place after this passes.
Comment from Drew Delaney
An excellent poem showing a silver lining. It's hard to believe that the water has become clear and the smog has dissipated in a relatively short time. I wish we could figure a way to keep the pollution down.
Well done.
Drew
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
|
An excellent poem showing a silver lining. It's hard to believe that the water has become clear and the smog has dissipated in a relatively short time. I wish we could figure a way to keep the pollution down.
Well done.
Drew
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
-
Thank you Drew, I really appreciate the review and comments. :)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like the message conveyed in this. I believe that this goes along with the saying that says, this to shall pass. The only guarantee each day that we have is that air that we breath that day. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
|
I like the message conveyed in this. I believe that this goes along with the saying that says, this to shall pass. The only guarantee each day that we have is that air that we breath that day. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
-
Thank you so much for stopping by and reviewing it.
Smiles,
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Gliding the Clouds, brings us all back around to the knowledge that this too will pass and we can look at the positive things in our world again.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
|
This poem, Gliding the Clouds, brings us all back around to the knowledge that this too will pass and we can look at the positive things in our world again.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
-
Thank you so much for the review and comments.
Smile,
