Not Love-Phone Sent
A Short Monorhyme13 total reviews
Comment from MARIANNE GI
I loved it, very meaningful. The words were combined in a very clever way and my favorite sentence was the last one "not love phone sent". I found it very professional
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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I loved it, very meaningful. The words were combined in a very clever way and my favorite sentence was the last one "not love phone sent". I found it very professional
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the 4 stars very much appreciated
Comment from Y. M. Roger
It is interesting the difference in the generations and what we're 'used to' or what we'd 'prefer'.... the younger generations are perfectly content with the texting/chatrooming/skyping conversations and visits whereas we still long for those hugs and touches and simply 'being there'! A great offering for the contest - best of luck at the polls!
futures intent --> future's intent
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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It is interesting the difference in the generations and what we're 'used to' or what we'd 'prefer'.... the younger generations are perfectly content with the texting/chatrooming/skyping conversations and visits whereas we still long for those hugs and touches and simply 'being there'! A great offering for the contest - best of luck at the polls!
futures intent --> future's intent
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much'''
Comment from kiwisteveh
I thought you'd picked the -ent rhyme to fit 'cement' into the poem and then you didn't use that word in the rhyming position!
You've done a good job withing the constraints of the rules plus the restriction of a monorhyme, although I have to say I am a little confused about the meaning of ;love-phone sent.'
Steve
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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I thought you'd picked the -ent rhyme to fit 'cement' into the poem and then you didn't use that word in the rhyming position!
You've done a good job withing the constraints of the rules plus the restriction of a monorhyme, although I have to say I am a little confused about the meaning of ;love-phone sent.'
Steve
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you, I would prefer to be able to travel and tell my family-face to face of my love, instead of sending my love via phone
