Small Town Girl
Poetic Biography22 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
So happy to see you won this bio poem contest! I too married at eighteen! Nowadays, you rarely if ever, hear of a girl going that. I was raised in Alabama, so we have another connection!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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So happy to see you won this bio poem contest! I too married at eighteen! Nowadays, you rarely if ever, hear of a girl going that. I was raised in Alabama, so we have another connection!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Yes we do. Mississippi and Alabama are sister states. I don't know which one gets the most flack. Thanks for the congratulation. I shared first prize. Didn't get much play money. LOL
Beth
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written bio you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very good bio. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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This is a very well written bio you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very good bio. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank;you so much for the review and comments.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I like the color scheme, the image, the monorhyme per verse, and your message. You gave a snapshot of your life. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I like the color scheme, the image, the monorhyme per verse, and your message. You gave a snapshot of your life. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the review. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from RShipp
"I got married at only eighteen.
At doing housework, I wasn't keen."
When I read these liens, I thought trouble would follow.
But then followed by "With him as king and me as his queen... it brought a huge grin to my face.
Sounds like you caught a winner! And apparently, he did too!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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"I got married at only eighteen.
At doing housework, I wasn't keen."
When I read these liens, I thought trouble would follow.
But then followed by "With him as king and me as his queen... it brought a huge grin to my face.
Sounds like you caught a winner! And apparently, he did too!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the review and delightful comments. Yep, I did catch a winner. I have no complaints about my life.
Comment from royowen
A well written bio of your life, beliefs, attitude and devotion sums up a girl who would be most satisfactory as a wife, lover, mother and friend. Great qualities in this modern world. Beautifully written in excellent mono rhyme stanzas and 9999 stanzas and very smooth and articulate, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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A well written bio of your life, beliefs, attitude and devotion sums up a girl who would be most satisfactory as a wife, lover, mother and friend. Great qualities in this modern world. Beautifully written in excellent mono rhyme stanzas and 9999 stanzas and very smooth and articulate, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank You Roy, I appreciate your review. i am curious if you know who I am from that poem. I may have given myself away.
Smiles,
Comment from Bichon
The rhyming scheme was well established, as was the personal tone and feelings. It was a very interesting read and great to know about you. Great work with this one.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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The rhyming scheme was well established, as was the personal tone and feelings. It was a very interesting read and great to know about you. Great work with this one.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank you. I enjoyed you comments.
Comment from Ogden
Those are admirable and not extravagant aspirations for a pleasant lifestyle.
(If that is you in the illustration, you sure do have a thin neck.)
;o)
Ogde (Don)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Those are admirable and not extravagant aspirations for a pleasant lifestyle.
(If that is you in the illustration, you sure do have a thin neck.)
;o)
Ogde (Don)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Don. I appreciate the review and comments. I hope no one really believes that is me.
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You're very welcome.
I think most people won't.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Small Town Girl", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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"Small Town Girl", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Duchess, I appreciate your review and delightful comments.
Comment from lance michaels
Very nice poem on your life so far. I hope it continues on it's present path. So many of us lose ourselves in jobs and trying to acquire material possessions, that we lose track of what is most important. Lovely piece of writing!!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Very nice poem on your life so far. I hope it continues on it's present path. So many of us lose ourselves in jobs and trying to acquire material possessions, that we lose track of what is most important. Lovely piece of writing!!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I appreciate the review and lovely comments.
Comment from A. Willow Bends
EXCELLENT. I can relate being a small town gal myself. You did a remarkable job and I can only think you will do well in the contest. I feel as if I know you from your short descriptive poetic entry and I think for this contest, you nailed it! :)
Great job!
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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EXCELLENT. I can relate being a small town gal myself. You did a remarkable job and I can only think you will do well in the contest. I feel as if I know you from your short descriptive poetic entry and I think for this contest, you nailed it! :)
Great job!
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and comments.
