Small Town Girl
Poetic Biography22 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Small Town Girl
Hello my friend
Great job with the biography poem. It's a story in a poem.
I think you married your highschool sweetheart.
Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Small Town Girl
Hello my friend
Great job with the biography poem. It's a story in a poem.
I think you married your highschool sweetheart.
Well done.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the review and nice comments. Let's say I married someone I met before I got out of high school.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a lovely, descriptive, moving poem. In describing the key points of your life, you have conveyed a powerful message about the joys of life for one whose "desires are few and not extreme."
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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This is a lovely, descriptive, moving poem. In describing the key points of your life, you have conveyed a powerful message about the joys of life for one whose "desires are few and not extreme."
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and the nice comments.
Comment from Rmocruz
Your poetic biography is clearly presented in solidly rhymed quatrains.
The pleasant cartoon artwork selection compliments your written words.
Best wishes with this enjoyable contest entry!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Your poetic biography is clearly presented in solidly rhymed quatrains.
The pleasant cartoon artwork selection compliments your written words.
Best wishes with this enjoyable contest entry!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your review and comments.
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You're welcome, my pleasure.
Comment from Minglement
I really enjoyed this entry in the Bio contest. You managed to cover a lot of territory and convey quite a bit about yourself, your history, your current life and aspirations. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I really enjoyed this entry in the Bio contest. You managed to cover a lot of territory and convey quite a bit about yourself, your history, your current life and aspirations. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the review and lovely comments. I read your entry and enjoyed it very much as well. You said a lot with a lot fewer words than me. I think your poem will do well in the contest.
Comment from Drew Delaney
I thought this to be so very nicely written. No siblings, but there must be children then for you mention family. Poetic biography is a challenge I would think. Nice job!
Drew
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I thought this to be so very nicely written. No siblings, but there must be children then for you mention family. Poetic biography is a challenge I would think. Nice job!
Drew
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and nice comment. No siblings for me but my children had siblings. I didn't want them to be alone.
Comment from Kit draken
God is god, god is life, god is good, and god loves the southern states.
He will care, he will care, despite all its mistakes.
Small town girl, with a lot of heart, the ambition of a big city woman
She'll make it in big, mean world
With her bible in her hand
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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God is god, god is life, god is good, and god loves the southern states.
He will care, he will care, despite all its mistakes.
Small town girl, with a lot of heart, the ambition of a big city woman
She'll make it in big, mean world
With her bible in her hand
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I'm so sorry these mean old world isn't treating you well. Do you want to talk about it? This sounds like a cry for help.
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Sorry. Just wanted to write something
Comment from Lobber
Hello,
Your words are simple, direct, honest with a cadence that rings of Southern charm with an open heart. Best of luck in the contest. - Xxxxxxxx Lobber
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Hello,
Your words are simple, direct, honest with a cadence that rings of Southern charm with an open heart. Best of luck in the contest. - Xxxxxxxx Lobber
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and nice comments.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Iread your poem carefully and the below lines stuck with me, is like an anti-corona antidot :"ove of God and country reign supreme.
A contented life's my cherished dream.
My desires are few and not extreme.
"Staying the course" will be my main theme."
thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest, and stay safe.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Iread your poem carefully and the below lines stuck with me, is like an anti-corona antidot :"ove of God and country reign supreme.
A contented life's my cherished dream.
My desires are few and not extreme.
"Staying the course" will be my main theme."
thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest, and stay safe.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for reviewing this. I really appreciate your comments.
Comment from Mary D Hollingsworth
I love the rhythm of this poem and the beautiful story it tells of a small town girl and how she grew up without siblings and her journey through life doing as she was told. And then how this poem continues to describe her journey of growing up and then getting married, her Hobbies and her aspirations. All these things were perfectly in Rhythm and rhyme and it gave her life story in such a beautiful way
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I love the rhythm of this poem and the beautiful story it tells of a small town girl and how she grew up without siblings and her journey through life doing as she was told. And then how this poem continues to describe her journey of growing up and then getting married, her Hobbies and her aspirations. All these things were perfectly in Rhythm and rhyme and it gave her life story in such a beautiful way
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and lovely comments.
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I enjoyed reading about the town girl thanks for sharing. I am closing this account and getting my old account that I had a year ago so don't respond to this reply you'll see me and other writings and I'm sure I'll see you my name my name is Mary Hollingsworth the same in my old account just wanted to share though that I lost a godson in his thirties to the virus 2 days ago and now his whole family is in the hospital so I can visit your prayers but again don't respond I am going to close this account and reopen my other one
Comment from Kellie Scranton
Beautiful poem about enjoying the life you have constructed for yourself. I love the way it's written but think you could possibly have created something just as poetic and glowing if it didn't rhyme. Love the focus on morality instead of material things, that is always an important lesson. Xo- Kellie
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Beautiful poem about enjoying the life you have constructed for yourself. I love the way it's written but think you could possibly have created something just as poetic and glowing if it didn't rhyme. Love the focus on morality instead of material things, that is always an important lesson. Xo- Kellie
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I've read a few poems on this site that weren't rhymed that actually sounded like poetry, but very few. I love to write prose but if it calls for a poem, I prefer it to rhyme. Thanks for the review and nice comments. This is first three star review I've ever gotten.
