A Window On My World
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Comment from CrystieCookie999
Thank you for a subtle little reminder that even little acts can help with bigger causes. And with an end rhyme 'eet' sound on all three lines, too! No dust settling on your sense of rhyme! Thanks for posting.
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Thank you for a subtle little reminder that even little acts can help with bigger causes. And with an end rhyme 'eet' sound on all three lines, too! No dust settling on your sense of rhyme! Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
Comment from Patty Palmer
Looking forward to reading your new series! This lockdown has people doing silly stuff to keep occupied; They've been posting them online. LOL One of my favorites was on Facebook. The caption said, "Coloring my hair" The picture showed the lady's hair with Crayola Crayons rolled into her hair like hair rollers.
Hope you're still staying safe!
Patty
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Looking forward to reading your new series! This lockdown has people doing silly stuff to keep occupied; They've been posting them online. LOL One of my favorites was on Facebook. The caption said, "Coloring my hair" The picture showed the lady's hair with Crayola Crayons rolled into her hair like hair rollers.
Hope you're still staying safe!
Patty
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a neat comment on this nasty business. I went food shopping early this morning at the time reserved for us oldies and stood in a queue in a temperature of 0° for fifteen minutes. They are determined to get rid of us geriatrics, either by virus or, more likely, exposure.
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This is a neat comment on this nasty business. I went food shopping early this morning at the time reserved for us oldies and stood in a queue in a temperature of 0° for fifteen minutes. They are determined to get rid of us geriatrics, either by virus or, more likely, exposure.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Social engineering?
Comment from RodG
I applaud you,Lisa, for entering the Na-Po-Wri-Mo challenge this month. But you are used to posting poems daily so it should not be grueling. I like the optimism expressed in #1. Good luck! Rod
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I applaud you,Lisa, for entering the Na-Po-Wri-Mo challenge this month. But you are used to posting poems daily so it should not be grueling. I like the optimism expressed in #1. Good luck! Rod
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
Comment from Ogden
Well, not because of that non-contact, anyhow. You obviously know what not to do in these difficult times.
Keep on keeping on!
Good luck in the contest, too.
Ogden (Don)
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Well, not because of that non-contact, anyhow. You obviously know what not to do in these difficult times.
Keep on keeping on!
Good luck in the contest, too.
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
Comment from dmt1967
This poem brings it home. I think this little poem says it all and the picture shows it all. We are all in the same boat and it doesn't matter who you are or what you believe. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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This poem brings it home. I think this little poem says it all and the picture shows it all. We are all in the same boat and it doesn't matter who you are or what you believe. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Coronavirus certainly has turned the whole world upside down. Instead of meeting people now, they want everyone to avoid one another. What a way to live. Hopefully, this foolishness won't last long and life will return to some semblance of normalcy.
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Coronavirus certainly has turned the whole world upside down. Instead of meeting people now, they want everyone to avoid one another. What a way to live. Hopefully, this foolishness won't last long and life will return to some semblance of normalcy.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
Comment from Jen Vasquez
I enjoyed reading this poem I like the way it's written out it's clear it's a all truthful and people can relate when facts are in there wish you could have been a little longer but I know you had a quota to fill... But you are right avoid and he'll stay inside hope to read more from you
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I enjoyed reading this poem I like the way it's written out it's clear it's a all truthful and people can relate when facts are in there wish you could have been a little longer but I know you had a quota to fill... But you are right avoid and he'll stay inside hope to read more from you
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
Comment from Brenda Henderson
I'm not trying to make light of the situation. However, truth be told there have always been people who crossed the street to avoid "certain" others for various reasons. Hopefully this collective time out will help us to all appreciate and value one another a little more than we did before. Well done.
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I'm not trying to make light of the situation. However, truth be told there have always been people who crossed the street to avoid "certain" others for various reasons. Hopefully this collective time out will help us to all appreciate and value one another a little more than we did before. Well done.
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Will life ever return to normal Lisa? This has heavily curtailed everybody's lifestyle and I miss my family so much, let's hope it won't last too long, a poignant write Lisa, life has changed and maybe it has changed forever, love Dolly x
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Will life ever return to normal Lisa? This has heavily curtailed everybody's lifestyle and I miss my family so much, let's hope it won't last too long, a poignant write Lisa, life has changed and maybe it has changed forever, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
