In the Pawn Shop
an 80-word story11 total reviews
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Very good and complete story in 80 words. Wow! Not easy at all.
I am not a lover of weapons in general, but this story gripped me from the start. But the surprise turn at the end was hilarious!
Very well done! Success in the contest.
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Very good and complete story in 80 words. Wow! Not easy at all.
I am not a lover of weapons in general, but this story gripped me from the start. But the surprise turn at the end was hilarious!
Very well done! Success in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I am so pleased my story?s ending amused you. Many thanks, Marjon, for your kind praise.
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very welcome. I had to laugh.
