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Full Moon Rising

An Etheree entry

13 total reviews 
Comment from Mark D. R.
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June,

Congrats on your 2nd place win. So pleased that I am FS fans with you and Yvette. IMHO my poetry style seems more observational than poetic; the latter is certainly yours ! (-;

Mark

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020

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    Thank you for your encouraging and supportive comments!
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
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I truly love your color scheme of blues and the point you make about the high wind storm. I also loved the suttle way you injected the purpose of the lighthouse as it warns the ships of the storms Dreadful Fury. Very good

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

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    Thank you!
reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 08-Apr-2020
    My pleasure it was a good read
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I like what you've done with this. The waves being mesmerized by the moon and its charms. That's really good and very well thought out. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Full Moon Rising

Hello my friend

Excellent Etheree writing prompt entry. The presentation is beautiful. Good syllable count. Great poetic form. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

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    Thank you! So glad you enjoyed this piece.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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Wild crashing waves could be what the world id experiencing today. The lighthouse could be God warning us to return to Him, or come look for Him. Well done!

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

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Comment from zanya
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Sense of mystique surrounding the full moon in lore well portrayed here in this Etheree - a sense of foreboding is well created and an appropriate visual to illustrate

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020

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Comment from susand3022
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Hello Author, this is a very nice Etheree! I liked the personification of the ocean, living on the lady myself, I'm aware of all her moods, especially her crashing, bashing one! Gotta' love a good lighthouse! :)

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020

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Comment from w.j.debi
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Excellent personification of the Moon and her wiles. Also, of the lighthouse being on the watch to warn others of the dangers her magical ways can cause.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020

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Comment from A Little Bird
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Congratulations on this well-worded piece! The poem painted such a majestic image in my mind. Stay safe during this Coronavirus pandemic! Good luck with the competition!

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020

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Comment from BeasPeas
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Your Etheree is beautifully illustrated and uses descriptive words. The two together make for a wonderful post which I enjoyed reading. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020

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    Thank you!