A Window On My World
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "A Place In The Sun"Daily 5-7-5 simplicities for April Na-Po-Wri-Mo
16 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
The sunny spot - I totally agree - we're finally getting a bit of spring - a bit late - but it's something. Two days in a row of sunshine - how good it feels and I empathize with your cat - wanting to stay in the sun.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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The sunny spot - I totally agree - we're finally getting a bit of spring - a bit late - but it's something. Two days in a row of sunshine - how good it feels and I empathize with your cat - wanting to stay in the sun.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Gee, you must have saved up your stars to shower on me! Thank you so much. I'm very pleased my writing appeals to you.
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I haven't been on fanstory much lately - busy with other things I guess. We've now had three sunny days in a row - whoopie.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 suite about finding a sunny spot when summer days turns to cooler Autumn days that become shorter while the sun moves further away.
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A very well-written 5-7-5 suite about finding a sunny spot when summer days turns to cooler Autumn days that become shorter while the sun moves further away.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem for the challenge, LisaMay. Your 575 suite reads smoothly with good imagery and is informative. I like the color scheme and love the kitty. I remember when you wrote/mentioned about the loss of your kitty last year. I lost 3 of mine in two weeks and I still miss all of them. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
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I enjoyed your poem for the challenge, LisaMay. Your 575 suite reads smoothly with good imagery and is informative. I like the color scheme and love the kitty. I remember when you wrote/mentioned about the loss of your kitty last year. I lost 3 of mine in two weeks and I still miss all of them. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
Comment from lyenochka
It reminds me of the Beatles' song "I'll follow the sun." That cat is so cute but yours was cuter of course. The cat is the connoisseur of comfort and a philosopher, too. Great and "sunny" way to show us how to deal with the situation today.
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It reminds me of the Beatles' song "I'll follow the sun." That cat is so cute but yours was cuter of course. The cat is the connoisseur of comfort and a philosopher, too. Great and "sunny" way to show us how to deal with the situation today.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
Comment from Drew Delaney
Love the pic of the cat here. The solar energy is nice to have. I wish I could afford solar panels, but I will not complain. It will be nice when this virus leaves us. A nice metaphor for hope.
Drew xx
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Love the pic of the cat here. The solar energy is nice to have. I wish I could afford solar panels, but I will not complain. It will be nice when this virus leaves us. A nice metaphor for hope.
Drew xx
Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Thanks for reviewing. That cat knows how to soak up the sun.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Nice philosophical poem grounded in physical realities and making an analogy about adapting to change. It is hard to live without a pet. Out of 3 cats in the house, only two seem to like sunshine enough to sit or lie in it, but they are not black like the other one. I found some 's' alliteration here, too, with 'sunny spot.' Nice post, cute photo.
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Nice philosophical poem grounded in physical realities and making an analogy about adapting to change. It is hard to live without a pet. Out of 3 cats in the house, only two seem to like sunshine enough to sit or lie in it, but they are not black like the other one. I found some 's' alliteration here, too, with 'sunny spot.' Nice post, cute photo.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
Comment from Rmocruz
I like this pleasant pussy-cat personification, with a great photo-art selection to enhance your worthy written word.
I have a male cat named Gary. He has two window seats, one on the east side of the house, the other on the west. Gary utilizes them both to follow the sun.
Well crafted!
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I like this pleasant pussy-cat personification, with a great photo-art selection to enhance your worthy written word.
I have a male cat named Gary. He has two window seats, one on the east side of the house, the other on the west. Gary utilizes them both to follow the sun.
Well crafted!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The picture of the cat is precious. The poem is well crafted with metaphors and imagery to render your message. Thank you sharing your thoughts during this pandemic.
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The picture of the cat is precious. The poem is well crafted with metaphors and imagery to render your message. Thank you sharing your thoughts during this pandemic.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
Comment from RodG
Our Daylight Savings Time BEGAN in March. I like each of these poems as each gives a snap-shot of a moment as the sun passes through your day. I especially like the optimism of the last one. Rod
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Our Daylight Savings Time BEGAN in March. I like each of these poems as each gives a snap-shot of a moment as the sun passes through your day. I especially like the optimism of the last one. Rod
Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
Comment from Pantygynt
In the picture this cat positively glows as if she'he carries her/his own sunshine around. I like these poetric tryptichs of yours. Two opposing views or instances are set out in the first and last stanza as examples of the philosophical statement contained in the central section.
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In the picture this cat positively glows as if she'he carries her/his own sunshine around. I like these poetric tryptichs of yours. Two opposing views or instances are set out in the first and last stanza as examples of the philosophical statement contained in the central section.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
