Someone
The Homeless Need...22 total reviews
Comment from Bichon
This was a very thoughtful and accurate poem. I especially loved the line:
" never left to cry in silent storms"
You are very correct. We are worried about our homeless too, we are under lockdown and must stay at home but they have no homes to stay in.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
  |
This was a very thoughtful and accurate poem. I especially loved the line:
" never left to cry in silent storms"
You are very correct. We are worried about our homeless too, we are under lockdown and must stay at home but they have no homes to stay in.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
-
Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Minglement
Sorry for the disqualification in the etheree contest. This thoughtful poem shines a light on a neglected population. What is being done to help them. I have heard locally, here in WA, of a motel that has been secured for some homeless, but I'm sure it's a drop in the bucket. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
|
Sorry for the disqualification in the etheree contest. This thoughtful poem shines a light on a neglected population. What is being done to help them. I have heard locally, here in WA, of a motel that has been secured for some homeless, but I'm sure it's a drop in the bucket. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
-
Thank you very much, yes I did not think it was worth changing, I love your comments, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Kanani De Contreras
I often think about the homeless, and the line about them being so uninformed is what I think about a lot. I wonder if they know what's going on in this Covid-19 pandemic. I'm sure they know a bit of it beacuse they are forced to leave parks and such where they use to Rome but I feel sympathy for them. I know alot of them have been through some crazy things.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
|
I often think about the homeless, and the line about them being so uninformed is what I think about a lot. I wonder if they know what's going on in this Covid-19 pandemic. I'm sure they know a bit of it beacuse they are forced to leave parks and such where they use to Rome but I feel sympathy for them. I know alot of them have been through some crazy things.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
-
Thank you for your very understanding review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello kahpot. Your poem is very thoughtful and well written. The subject is hard to express well but you did it well. I like the form of your etheree poem and it has an excellent appearance.
Robert
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
|
Hello kahpot. Your poem is very thoughtful and well written. The subject is hard to express well but you did it well. I like the form of your etheree poem and it has an excellent appearance.
Robert
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
-
Thank you Robert for your encouraging review and comments, much appreciated****kahpot
-
You're welcome
Comment from joycetreasures
Kahpot,
My goodness, I love the formating of this homeless poem. I also pray for those unforunate ones than myself. We are so blessed and most of us know it. But, everyone is not so blessed. We should NEVER forget the homeless, the destitute, the poor or the needed ones. They pray silently for help, with so much pride they may not ask for assistance. Prayer is FREE, which we can do or them every day. Yet, we can also say hello, and have a conversation with hem when we can. We all want hope, so do them. This is a lovely written poem. Good job! I love the photo. Thank you very much. Happy writing:-).
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
|
Kahpot,
My goodness, I love the formating of this homeless poem. I also pray for those unforunate ones than myself. We are so blessed and most of us know it. But, everyone is not so blessed. We should NEVER forget the homeless, the destitute, the poor or the needed ones. They pray silently for help, with so much pride they may not ask for assistance. Prayer is FREE, which we can do or them every day. Yet, we can also say hello, and have a conversation with hem when we can. We all want hope, so do them. This is a lovely written poem. Good job! I love the photo. Thank you very much. Happy writing:-).
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
-
Thank you for your wonderful comments and for having thought for the needy, very much appreciated****kahpot
-
You are so welcome.
Comment from Ross E Silke
This is so uniformed and speaks with vibrancy. It is carefully composed and tightly written and has much truth and value to take away from it and apply to the world around us. I like the chalk board presentation and the picture is of high quality and clear in both the artwork and the writing.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
|
This is so uniformed and speaks with vibrancy. It is carefully composed and tightly written and has much truth and value to take away from it and apply to the world around us. I like the chalk board presentation and the picture is of high quality and clear in both the artwork and the writing.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
-
Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, much appreciated
Comment from RShipp
I have never written an Etheree, but you have used teh required 1-10 and 10-1 syllable requirements highlighting the plight of the homeless and a very unique way.
I could feel you passion.
Enjoyed.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
|
I have never written an Etheree, but you have used teh required 1-10 and 10-1 syllable requirements highlighting the plight of the homeless and a very unique way.
I could feel you passion.
Enjoyed.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
-
Thank you very much, it was fun trying this form, your comments are much appreciated
Comment from Drew Delaney
You have painted a sad picture of homelessness. I cannot imagine the feeling of suc insecurity and hopelessness. The soup kitchens are open in the city where I live and money is being raised to help feed them. Probably not enough though. And difficulty to keep the two metre distancing. Wonderful poem!
Drew
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
|
You have painted a sad picture of homelessness. I cannot imagine the feeling of suc insecurity and hopelessness. The soup kitchens are open in the city where I live and money is being raised to help feed them. Probably not enough though. And difficulty to keep the two metre distancing. Wonderful poem!
Drew
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
-
Thank you very much, it is good to know that help is being thought of, stay well
Comment from June Sargent
A sad and poignant piece that reminds us of the many who suffer - invisible and forgotten. We need to be less judgmental and more concerned for those less fortunate. Thank you for the reminder.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
|
A sad and poignant piece that reminds us of the many who suffer - invisible and forgotten. We need to be less judgmental and more concerned for those less fortunate. Thank you for the reminder.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
-
Thank you, yes I think they need help as much as others
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Someone
Hello my friend,
Well done, you bring up an important issue in your well written poem.
We are told to stay home but homeless people can't do that.
There are approximately 550,000 homeless persons in the United States, the spread of Covid-19 presents a uniquely grave threat.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
|
Someone
Hello my friend,
Well done, you bring up an important issue in your well written poem.
We are told to stay home but homeless people can't do that.
There are approximately 550,000 homeless persons in the United States, the spread of Covid-19 presents a uniquely grave threat.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
-
Thank you friend for seeing my point, a wonderful review
