Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is a very good observation. Best luck in the contest if it is still ongoing. The Titanic tragedy haunts us as we mourn for people we didn't know. A very sad thing. Marilyn

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

Yes the Titanic story captures the imagination -thanks for reading zanya

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, only one voyage (nearly) yet her name and presence lives on, as stories keep coming, very well written, you should post this under poetry for more affect, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

Thanks for reading and words of advice zanya

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A good one for this unusual 5-7-5.... Your poem, however, is posted as a fiction story/prose writing. You should contact 'Tom' and have him correct it for you... Best of luck at the polls!

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

Thanks for that reminder & review zanya

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Titanic sunk; it is historic, studies reveal the charismatic endurance aspect of the event, we appreciate the truth; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

Thanks for reading zanya