Inspiring Children
Two Line Poem13 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
Hopefully, a a teacher, I have sewn my share of these "seeds of inspiration" ... what a lovely poem and a grand sentiment!
A very thought-provoking read!
Best of luck in the Two Line Poetry Contest.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Hopefully, a a teacher, I have sewn my share of these "seeds of inspiration" ... what a lovely poem and a grand sentiment!
A very thought-provoking read!
Best of luck in the Two Line Poetry Contest.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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I?m so glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for dropping by to share your insights!
Comment from Selyob
What a beautifully smooth and near perfect poem. I thought someone finally won my sixth star... and then... not.
This lost the sixth star in the missing comma that should have followed "painting" in the second line. This comma was required to maintain the rhythm of the pattern which was established in the list which is the entire second line.
Probably the best "new" poem I have read in over a year.... Well done.
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What a beautifully smooth and near perfect poem. I thought someone finally won my sixth star... and then... not.
This lost the sixth star in the missing comma that should have followed "painting" in the second line. This comma was required to maintain the rhythm of the pattern which was established in the list which is the entire second line.
Probably the best "new" poem I have read in over a year.... Well done.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This two-line poem, Inspiring Children, uses sixteen words and urges us to teach our children how to live a good life, learn useful and fulfilling skills, and make a world that we can all be proud of.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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This two-line poem, Inspiring Children, uses sixteen words and urges us to teach our children how to live a good life, learn useful and fulfilling skills, and make a world that we can all be proud of.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Comment from artisart4u
This is so true, using our time of isolation to go back to some of the things we put aside. I know I am thinking of poems.
Older people are younger people inspiration.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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This is so true, using our time of isolation to go back to some of the things we put aside. I know I am thinking of poems.
Older people are younger people inspiration.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your positive feedback!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your one-line poem packs a powerful, moving message about inspiration and its results. Your have used "seeds" very effectively and creatively as a metaphor.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Your one-line poem packs a powerful, moving message about inspiration and its results. Your have used "seeds" very effectively and creatively as a metaphor.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your positive feedback!
Comment from skyer111
Yes love the sentiments and it's easy to relate to the message you are sending out and what a lovely way of expressing them well I wish you well in the contest well done
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Yes love the sentiments and it's easy to relate to the message you are sending out and what a lovely way of expressing them well I wish you well in the contest well done
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your positive feedback!
Comment from zanya
Yes it's a lovely sentiment, the idea of producing a piece of art to inspire those who come after us -and an appropriate visual to illustrate -thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Yes it's a lovely sentiment, the idea of producing a piece of art to inspire those who come after us -and an appropriate visual to illustrate -thanks for sharing
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Two Line Poetry contest.
This short piece tells of creation and inspiration.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Two Line Poetry contest.
This short piece tells of creation and inspiration.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry makes a great, meaningful statement, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. The presentation is super. Your words are well-chosen and ones that all need to aspire too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Your contest entry makes a great, meaningful statement, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. The presentation is super. Your words are well-chosen and ones that all need to aspire too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from RodG
Yes, anyone who has talent and PATIENCE can truly "sow the seeds" that will transform another into an artist. I see this happening so often now as parents--now with time to spare--teach their children the arts. Rod
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Yes, anyone who has talent and PATIENCE can truly "sow the seeds" that will transform another into an artist. I see this happening so often now as parents--now with time to spare--teach their children the arts. Rod
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
