Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Yes!! The artists live by that inspiration!! ;) I would suggest, perhaps, enlarging your font by a number of points because it is reeeeally hard to focus on and read... ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020

I?m afraid if I did enlarge the font it becomes more than two lines. That disqualified me once!

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

You've written an excellent two line poem for the contest
that could be seen as a adage for all ages.
Excellent use of alliteration in the "s" and "p" words
and a nice rhyme, as well.
This should do very well in the contest.
Best wishes to you.
Stay safe.
Robert

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020

Thank you!

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

One of the reasons I love Blues music is the tradition that's passed down. What a wonderfully written poem. You might want to make the font a tad larger to make it easy to read. I know seeds are small things.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020

I?m afraid if I did enlarge the font it becomes more than two lines. That disqualified me once!