Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Sounds ok, to me, Mystery Author. One never knows what to expect out of the mouths of kids. I enjoyed your contest entry. The ending was perfect as is the picture. Best wishes. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

Thank you very much, Jan. Your review is much appreciated.

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

For all we know, that's exactly the story Norman Rockwell wanted to tell.
Nice job of putting a little extra twist at the end.
I wish you lots of luck when the polls open.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

Thank you very much, Lee. I like to think there was a story behind every painting Rockwell did.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Humour is evident; the cop saw the little boy running away but he answered he was meeting Ma at the Laundromat; cop's guess was wrong; well said, well done.

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 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

Thank you very much for sharing this vignette.

Comment from Scarbrems

Excellent

Ok, so we'll bypass the fact that it's a hot day here, and I now crave a sundae, lol. This is a charming vignette. Everyone knows runaway kids pack their stuff in cloths and carry it on a stick, so neat little twist there. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

Enjoy your hot day and that sundae. Here it is cool. Many thanks for sharing my shorty.